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Blue Angel
Moon-ray casts through parted skies, a primal invitation. A tongue danced delicacy, of carnal consumption. A ceremonial offering, his thirst compelling. He doesn't stop until she's a hair's-breadth from eternity's gasp. He swallows down an orgasmic rush, gleaning on her screams. Writhing beneath his manhood, she willingly feeds his bloodlust. He arches back, in full depth, face to the sky, she tastes the ecstasy in his eyes. Blue angel shan't be denied.
Published 20th Oct 2013
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20th Oct 2013 7:16pm
startling artpiece that you chose for this. I feel a consumption of love within lust, & wonder who is the more demanding lover...
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28th Oct 2013 2:52am
Sweet, Thank you so very much, Sir Lancelotte your comment is appreciated:)
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11th Jun 2014 6:10pm
beautiful arching
blue
lovely soft sweet orgasmic
and the sustenance of erection
wow
how can one resist the valleys
volley
arched back and suckin are the delight
of those eyes
watching
your poem is serene
cal quiet and clean
blue
lovely soft sweet orgasmic
and the sustenance of erection
wow
how can one resist the valleys
volley
arched back and suckin are the delight
of those eyes
watching
your poem is serene
cal quiet and clean
19th Aug 2014 8:35pm
Blue Angel shan't be denied
That phrase alone makes me teeth for fevered flesh that openly yearns for carnal infliction under the misty rays of moons smile.
That phrase alone makes me teeth for fevered flesh that openly yearns for carnal infliction under the misty rays of moons smile.
