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Mute
I am told who I am by many
Whom I respond with certainty
To their incomprehensibility
Spoken of myself
Revealing of health
Lacking in wealth
Proving only dignity
I ask
Indulgent feverish compliance
Of madness given
Impotent
Grudgent
Conscient
Irrelevant men
Fore thine unconsciousness slain
Their luggage left found sly
In posthaste of thine lie
A deviate pined dis-try
Wherein loaf-sent shame
Bares hate-shortened reality
To cry eternally
For tragedy is truth
And witness is born
With satiation exempt
For no matter limits thine grasp
Whom I respond with certainty
To their incomprehensibility
Spoken of myself
Revealing of health
Lacking in wealth
Proving only dignity
I ask
Indulgent feverish compliance
Of madness given
Impotent
Grudgent
Conscient
Irrelevant men
Fore thine unconsciousness slain
Their luggage left found sly
In posthaste of thine lie
A deviate pined dis-try
Wherein loaf-sent shame
Bares hate-shortened reality
To cry eternally
For tragedy is truth
And witness is born
With satiation exempt
For no matter limits thine grasp
Published 19th Oct 2013
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19th Oct 2013 7:58am
Now that's a deep poem made allot of sense, gives my mind the tingles well written Jarring
19th Oct 2013 11:45pm
Thanks for the kind words. I find it very refreshing to think that someone understands what I meant by this. Sometimes I feel that a lot of my literary musings go unnoticed for the lack of understanding.
