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Just Knock
The music has stopped...
her silhouette in the night
not seen any more.
Should have taken the chance
while there was light.
Afraid to knock on that door
never made it to the dance.
Life lesson...
Don't wait for the invite :)
her silhouette in the night
not seen any more.
Should have taken the chance
while there was light.
Afraid to knock on that door
never made it to the dance.
Life lesson...
Don't wait for the invite :)
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Re: Just Knock
19th Oct 2013 00:44am
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19th Oct 2013 2:19am
Re: Just Knock
19th Oct 2013 2:04am
oh Hash,
I've often
wished I'd
knocked at
a door that
there isn't any
point at knocking
at anymore..:(
I've often
wished I'd
knocked at
a door that
there isn't any
point at knocking
at anymore..:(
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- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
19th Oct 2013 3:03am
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19th Oct 2013 8:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2019 8:45pm
19th Oct 2013 6:10am
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19th Oct 2013 8:05pm
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- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
19th Oct 2013 5:49pm
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19th Oct 2013 8:01pm
Re: Just Knock
19th Oct 2013 10:24pm
Missed opportunities suck, but don't forget all the other silhouette dancers waiting for a hand held out.
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re: Re: Just Knock
20th Oct 2013 4:08pm
Re: Just Knock
20th Oct 2013 9:33am
re: Re: Just Knock
20th Oct 2013 4:12pm
Sometimes we wait and wait just to let it slip away :)...thanks for reading :)
Re: Just Knock
21st Oct 2013 6:03pm