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Sumerian Skies
A rendezvous of forbidden flavour
conceived of a darker shade of pleasure.
We meet beyond the courtyard beneath the live oak tree.
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There the universe unfolds, unscrolls, cracking aristocratic molds.
He squeezes my juices upon his chin like overly ripened sin.
With both hands I hold his tenfold masterpiece as royalty set free.
Tightly drawn strings reveal weakened cotton seams.
Lilac scented breeze stirs my long, silken waves.
Torrent passion released within my soiled, frilly lace.
I gaze upon his sculptured design. You Sir, I shan't deny.
I tangle in my hem, grasping grass, struggling against him.
He holds in deep and fills me with his fervent seeds.
As blood slides down my thighs this cherry pie is left in utter strife.
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"Look at you lying there bottom bare.
Harlot in training with his seed still draining."
Tis, my father whose punishment is not spared.
Unhinged, he belts me, right then and there.
I admire the welts I wear. I think of him when I dare.
conceived of a darker shade of pleasure.
We meet beyond the courtyard beneath the live oak tree.
.........................
There the universe unfolds, unscrolls, cracking aristocratic molds.
He squeezes my juices upon his chin like overly ripened sin.
With both hands I hold his tenfold masterpiece as royalty set free.
Tightly drawn strings reveal weakened cotton seams.
Lilac scented breeze stirs my long, silken waves.
Torrent passion released within my soiled, frilly lace.
I gaze upon his sculptured design. You Sir, I shan't deny.
I tangle in my hem, grasping grass, struggling against him.
He holds in deep and fills me with his fervent seeds.
As blood slides down my thighs this cherry pie is left in utter strife.
...........................
"Look at you lying there bottom bare.
Harlot in training with his seed still draining."
Tis, my father whose punishment is not spared.
Unhinged, he belts me, right then and there.
I admire the welts I wear. I think of him when I dare.
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Re: Sumerian Skies
18th Oct 2013 3:25am
Hey there...don't I know you from somewhere? A certain dark place? Good to see you around these parts. I'm a new arrival myself...
Wow...I love poetry that is both intelligent & visceral. This is some gritty erotica here, poetry with teeth, hurts to read...well conceived, blue_angel. Welcome, you :)
Wow...I love poetry that is both intelligent & visceral. This is some gritty erotica here, poetry with teeth, hurts to read...well conceived, blue_angel. Welcome, you :)
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re: Re: Sumerian Skies
18th Oct 2013 4:03am
Yes..., hi there and thank you so much for the warm welcome and spicy comment :)~
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18th Oct 2013 8:15am
I see the ancient sky & the oak tree where you pursue your clandestine affair. your poem is sensual & somewhat brutal. I also admire the welts...
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18th Oct 2013 2:06pm
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18th Nov 2013 5:09pm
WOW sweets, That was a HOT Dark piece of sensuality!!!
I enjoyed the read!!
Great write too!!!!
Sir Lancelott
I enjoyed the read!!
Great write too!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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19th Nov 2013 00:25am
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19th Nov 2013 7:37am
Wow, this is a sensual bomb-shell. A super sexy rendezvous with perhaps an incestuous hint at the end that kinda grosses me out but it's a feast for the senses!
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19th Nov 2013 7:42am
Thank you truly, her father at the ending is not the same person she had the rendezvous with, :)She got caught afterwards...
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19th Nov 2013 7:46am
Pheeeeeewww! I was hoping that was the case!! Then I'm thinking full on sexy piece. Someone else said visceral...great description. I love the picture of the grasping of the grass ;)
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19th Nov 2013 7:54am
I'm like a magpie when I discover a shiny gem I can't get enough of it :)
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19th Nov 2013 3:34pm
I will frequently come to perch awhile drawn like a moth to flame and mesmerized by your shine.
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The flame loves to rise and flicker while licking softly upon those that seek its warmth :)
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19th Nov 2013 4:35pm
Light my flame
so that I may carry
some away with me
that I too will
be warmed always
as it burns bright
deep inside of me
:)
so that I may carry
some away with me
that I too will
be warmed always
as it burns bright
deep inside of me
:)
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20th Nov 2013 9:14pm
a blue fire of desire
is placed within your gaze
slow and steady it burns
melting the heart that yearns
:)
is placed within your gaze
slow and steady it burns
melting the heart that yearns
:)
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19th Nov 2013 3:51pm
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16th Dec 2013 10:24pm
tenfold....... masterpiece as royalty set free.
I don't seem to follow
why women think
a tenner alone can fill the hollow
man was given
a sixer
to be swallowed
all women have a four inch hollow
but tonnes of sperms they'd love to swallow
but that takes a life time to make
a spoon each time
when you have a take
of that there can be no mistake
I don't seem to follow
why women think
a tenner alone can fill the hollow
man was given
a sixer
to be swallowed
all women have a four inch hollow
but tonnes of sperms they'd love to swallow
but that takes a life time to make
a spoon each time
when you have a take
of that there can be no mistake
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17th Dec 2013 6:46am
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19th Jan 2014 10:06pm
This is great...the description and imagery are thrilling...you capture such magic in the moment here...
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19th Jan 2014 10:08pm
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2nd Mar 2014 2:56pm
Thank you, immensely!! *You comment, and adding it to your reading list, is highly appreciated*:)
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18th Apr 2014 7:32pm
This is breath taking Angel, The scenes are described in great detail leaving no room for imagination nor would I ever have imagined it better. Pure innocence that unravels a women before us hinting the notions of the beginnings of her BDSM erotic journey.
Classy write
Classy write
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19th Apr 2014 8:27pm
yes, I love your assessments. You are spot on. Thank you for traveling back in time :) It's deeply appreciated!!