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On the water
Distance
the sky cries out
pouring over liquid thoughts
as beads form
settling
comfortably
on leaves
dripping only
to quench
what part of parched
dies
from thirst
Waves
form oceans of time
and riding the crest
in my memory
touches
soft
whet appetites
horizon lines
paddling on
this soul sacred surf
beating
back time
the sky cries out
pouring over liquid thoughts
as beads form
settling
comfortably
on leaves
dripping only
to quench
what part of parched
dies
from thirst
Waves
form oceans of time
and riding the crest
in my memory
touches
soft
whet appetites
horizon lines
paddling on
this soul sacred surf
beating
back time
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18th Oct 2013 1:10am
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Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 10:31pm
A brilliant play of words, Gabe! This is truly lovely! Love when you drop new ink! Xo
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17th Oct 2013 11:23pm
awesome man very "soulful" in the ol sd "soul sacred surf" fashion
tightly gripped but delicately woven., i like how it stays 2g neatly sd. well done man...
tightly gripped but delicately woven., i like how it stays 2g neatly sd. well done man...
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18th Oct 2013 1:17am
Thanks Much JR...that's something I really need to work with is keeping things neat...or more use of stanzas and form...I shy from it much.
Re: On the water
18th Oct 2013 00:25am
Delved in memories, encouraged by beauty of nature...tranquil scenes evoked by a poets mind. I'm glad you have shared such thoughts and imageries. Good read, Soul.
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18th Oct 2013 2:41am
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22nd Oct 2013 1:01am
Soul, I happened to notice that on one of your comments, you say "shy away from stanzas"
Soul, what you ink if it be long, short, whatever. It`s fek1n magical at times.
KG
Soul, what you ink if it be long, short, whatever. It`s fek1n magical at times.
KG
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