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Ok, I'm working in this song...this is def a rough draft. Any feedback or ideas are welcome!
I like the way you choose your words
You got descriptive verbs
Find ways to say impossible things
I like the way you talk to me
Sharing thoughts elaborately
Make ways to say just what you mean
You got me hanging on your every word
Scratching down everything I heard
I could write a book on you
Teach the world a thing or two
Eloquence, common sense
Magnetic charm, intelligence
Sexy slang, adult content
(Can't think of a line to close this up....feels like it needs to end in an ew or ay sound)
I like my name when it's on your lips
Slides to the tip of your tongue
Falls off like sweet honey drips
I like how you can't refrain
When you use what you say
In debate to get your way
You got more words
Than I ever heard
But I like what you say
Im a slave to your mouth
Waitin' to see what comes out (I don't like this line!)
I like the way you choose your words
You got descriptive verbs
Find ways to say impossible things
I like the way you talk to me
Sharing thoughts elaborately
Make ways to say just what you mean
You got me hanging on your every word
Scratching down everything I heard
I could write a book on you
Teach the world a thing or two
Eloquence, common sense
Magnetic charm, intelligence
Sexy slang, adult content
(Can't think of a line to close this up....feels like it needs to end in an ew or ay sound)
I like my name when it's on your lips
Slides to the tip of your tongue
Falls off like sweet honey drips
I like how you can't refrain
When you use what you say
In debate to get your way
You got more words
Than I ever heard
But I like what you say
Im a slave to your mouth
Waitin' to see what comes out (I don't like this line!)
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