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The Succubus
Hopelessly hooked at first sight
Lured me in
Hypnotic eyes
Spawn of hell
Beautiful lies
I was under her spell
Kept me drained
Love illusion
Locked in lust
Sweet pain
She then betrayed
Fucked another
This "love" turned to hate
Got used like a tool
I still think about her.
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 11:17pm
Careful with those succubi. I've been put through the ringer by a share of them myself. There is more than one I still think about. We all get taken for a ride at some point (don't forget about the ladies & their incubi as well!)...you are not alone. It happens to the best of us...& the worst of us. Surely love won't be an illusion forever, eh? It helps to write about it.
15th Oct 2013 11:45pm
Hopefully, but after an experience like that, its difficult to trust women the same way. Keeps me on my toes. And yes, it does help to write about it. :)
