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Tender Love
T*rusting, the heart does without hesitation
E*ncompassing with thoughts and adulation
N*ow the perspective, becomes a primary focus
D*iaphanous meaning, alike minds can scope this
E*uphonic whispers sail along on in the wind
R*ouses a closed heart, from deep within
L*iasons between heart and mind, one concedes
O*pulent kisses enough to satiate each other's needs
V*oluntarily lost in a ocean through chance
E*verything's clearer, once eyes take a second glance
E*ncompassing with thoughts and adulation
N*ow the perspective, becomes a primary focus
D*iaphanous meaning, alike minds can scope this
E*uphonic whispers sail along on in the wind
R*ouses a closed heart, from deep within
L*iasons between heart and mind, one concedes
O*pulent kisses enough to satiate each other's needs
V*oluntarily lost in a ocean through chance
E*verything's clearer, once eyes take a second glance
Published 14th Oct 2013
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14th Oct 2013 1:25pm
14th Oct 2013 1:49pm
14th Oct 2013 1:44pm
14th Oct 2013 1:51pm
Aaaawwww thank you sweetie ... I pray those memories were
good ones! :) appreciate you :)
good ones! :) appreciate you :)
14th Oct 2013 2:40pm
thank you, i added those asterisks BECUZ many poet don't see the acrostic when it's there, also i normally space, or capitalize, just wanted something different isall... appreciate u lady.
Anonymous
14th Oct 2013 3:44pm
Amazing Ink! Xo
14th Oct 2013 7:49pm
Thank you! Your pretty amazing yourself too lady :)
I'm honored n humbled by your continuous support :)
I'm honored n humbled by your continuous support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
14th Oct 2013 4:15pm
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14th Oct 2013 7:52pm
Guilty as charged! Lol although I have this 'disease' called
being a fool for it lol... Thank you my dear, appreciate you always :)
being a fool for it lol... Thank you my dear, appreciate you always :)
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Apr 2019 1:35am
14th Oct 2013 4:32pm
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14th Oct 2013 7:53pm
Again, I'm humbled n grateful for your support my friend n I shall do my best... Gotta get over ur way soon :)
14th Oct 2013 8:32pm
14th Oct 2013 9:27pm
Thank you for your thoughts n time on my ink
n yes I shall try n keep inking as much as possible :)
n yes I shall try n keep inking as much as possible :)
15th Oct 2013 3:47am
You and D_Poetic Engineer have terrific skills with acrostic poems. It was a joy to read the word play.
15th Oct 2013 4:26am
Why thank you my friend! I try to do them in a variety of ways
to keep it interesting lol STILL, as long as it's understood then I'm good with it :) appreciate u always :)
to keep it interesting lol STILL, as long as it's understood then I'm good with it :) appreciate u always :)
16th Oct 2013 7:36pm
18th Oct 2013 2:41pm
Aaaawwww ur always so sweet my dear! Thank you I truly am grateful to you always :)
17th Oct 2013 8:39pm
18th Oct 2013 2:43pm
My dear bro. I'm humbled n feel honored by your very sincere
thoughts, can't claim genius, just fortunate that God gave me something in which to share :) appreciate much! :)
thoughts, can't claim genius, just fortunate that God gave me something in which to share :) appreciate much! :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:57pm
18th Oct 2013 2:15pm
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18th Oct 2013 2:51pm
Well gosh, how wonderful to get such an amazing comment as this? I'm flattered n truly humbled... N ur a big fan of the 'O...?'
as in what? Org**m? Me Too! Lmao jk... Thanks my friend :)
as in what? Org**m? Me Too! Lmao jk... Thanks my friend :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:57pm
18th Oct 2013 9:35pm
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