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ALWAYS
I remember
the first word you said
I still say it was "da-da"
so magical.
I remember
the twinkle in your eye
the way you would laugh
so loud.
I remember
your first taste of ice cream
you shook and shivered...wildly
so funny.
I remember
you doing the Hokey-Pokey
in your Spider-Man pj's
so happy.
I remember
reading you bedtime stories
always ending with your favorite
so peaceful.
I remember
your first day of school
waiting for the bus
so exciting.
I remember
your first 100%
I put it on the fridge
so proud.
I remember
you riding your bike
peddling so fast,hair blowing in the wind
so brave.
I remember
you believing every word I said
the look in your eyes
so loyal.
I remember
your hugs and kisses
they were endless
so warm.
I remember
just watching you sleep
I could watch forever
so tranquil.
I remember
your never-ending love
there every day,no matter what
so unconditional.
I so remember
all you've said and done,
always with me,heart and soul
so thankful.
the first word you said
I still say it was "da-da"
so magical.
I remember
the twinkle in your eye
the way you would laugh
so loud.
I remember
your first taste of ice cream
you shook and shivered...wildly
so funny.
I remember
you doing the Hokey-Pokey
in your Spider-Man pj's
so happy.
I remember
reading you bedtime stories
always ending with your favorite
so peaceful.
I remember
your first day of school
waiting for the bus
so exciting.
I remember
your first 100%
I put it on the fridge
so proud.
I remember
you riding your bike
peddling so fast,hair blowing in the wind
so brave.
I remember
you believing every word I said
the look in your eyes
so loyal.
I remember
your hugs and kisses
they were endless
so warm.
I remember
just watching you sleep
I could watch forever
so tranquil.
I remember
your never-ending love
there every day,no matter what
so unconditional.
I so remember
all you've said and done,
always with me,heart and soul
so thankful.
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13th Oct 2013 10:59pm
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13th Oct 2013 6:24pm
O, ...such a loving, touchingly tender tribute to the love that you have for your child!
So blessed....soo very fortunate--to be sure--is your precious little one, to have you as a father.
Words from the heart!
So blessed....soo very fortunate--to be sure--is your precious little one, to have you as a father.
Words from the heart!
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13th Oct 2013 11:03pm
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13th Oct 2013 11:06pm
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13th Oct 2013 7:06pm
Bro. This is so touching... A truly beautiful piece
pouring over with love... A fav!
pouring over with love... A fav!
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13th Oct 2013 11:10pm
My brother,love for the children always and forever :) Thank you always Poetikmind :)
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14th Oct 2013 00:23am
I wish I'd written this..:) my
son is in uni in the north of
England and I miss him...
Great writing, Hash...
son is in uni in the north of
England and I miss him...
Great writing, Hash...
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15th Oct 2013 7:06pm
Bloody brilliant. Got me in a bit of a state. The most poignant write in ages for me. My eyes are watered and I've a lump in my throat. Beautiful microstudy of the young Our young. Written for one but somehow embraces all our babies.
Simply Perfect
Simply Perfect
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16th Oct 2013 1:11am
So true syn1...it's such a strong love.Happy to make you feel that love.(thank you for your very kind words) peace :)
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18th Oct 2013 1:34am
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18th Oct 2013 11:14pm
The love for a child
never ever
compares to anything
else.
Heartrending - and so good!
never ever
compares to anything
else.
Heartrending - and so good!
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18th Oct 2013 11:19pm