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Ideal.
I want to die with a bloodied chin,
As evidence of trying to beat whatever -
Whoever - did me in. To be specific,
I need it to be to the bone,
Through the skin and the blood;
All that knows how to live,
How to sin.
(Honestly, you know I would, and have been.)
Yes,
I want to die with a bloodied chin
To show that at one point,
haha,
This kid fought to win.
As evidence of trying to beat whatever -
Whoever - did me in. To be specific,
I need it to be to the bone,
Through the skin and the blood;
All that knows how to live,
How to sin.
(Honestly, you know I would, and have been.)
Yes,
I want to die with a bloodied chin
To show that at one point,
haha,
This kid fought to win.
Published 16th Jan 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36am
16th Jan 2011 8:19am
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- Edited 20th May 2020 11:37am
17th Jan 2011 1:12am
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17th Jan 2011 4:16am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
17th Jan 2011 12:13pm
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19th Jan 2011 11:35pm
its laced with a humour... but is also extremely meaningful as well and completely to the point.
i think its very clever and i really enjoyed it too.
i too want to die.. with a bloodied chin
i think its very clever and i really enjoyed it too.
i too want to die.. with a bloodied chin
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2020 7:37pm
14th Aug 2011 1:43pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:38pm
9th Nov 2011 8:40pm
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