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Push Me
Push me to the limit
don't let me stop.
If I cry
push harder,
do not go easy
make it hurt.
If I quit
drag me back
kick my butt
call me out
let the sweat
burn my eyes,
make me feel
the burn inside.
In the end
you and me
we are one.
For _shadoe_ and all the Ballerinas out there...Bravo
wrote this after reading her poem "Pas de Deux" (yup,another ballet poem)
don't let me stop.
If I cry
push harder,
do not go easy
make it hurt.
If I quit
drag me back
kick my butt
call me out
let the sweat
burn my eyes,
make me feel
the burn inside.
In the end
you and me
we are one.
For _shadoe_ and all the Ballerinas out there...Bravo
wrote this after reading her poem "Pas de Deux" (yup,another ballet poem)
Published 12th Oct 2013
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12th Oct 2013 1:58am
It's good to have that person who will push you in life. Kid gloves can cause long-term damage, really. People show you that they care by nicking you with that edge. It's not always nice, but it can lead to great positive effect. Good short piece, Hashman.
13th Oct 2013 00:21am
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13th Oct 2013 00:23am
12th Oct 2013 3:02am
13th Oct 2013 00:25am
12th Oct 2013 4:45am
The 'no pain, no gain' side of 'tough love'...sometimes, this is just what one needs to attain personal achievement, and growth.
What a thoughtful dedication, my friend!
An inspiring piece, to be certain. :)
What a thoughtful dedication, my friend!
An inspiring piece, to be certain. :)
13th Oct 2013 00:28am
Thank you DarkEnchantress...you inspire me with your eloquent and thoughtful words :)
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13th Oct 2013 00:33am
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13th Oct 2013 00:37am
12th Oct 2013 11:35am
My wife would empathise
with this, when she tries
to get me out of bed most
mornings..! Seriously, tho,
an inspiring piece, Hash..:)
with this, when she tries
to get me out of bed most
mornings..! Seriously, tho,
an inspiring piece, Hash..:)
13th Oct 2013 00:40am
12th Oct 2013 1:17pm
Amazing dude...very simple yet powerful...especially the very end...like this alot Hash...
13th Oct 2013 00:43am
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13th Oct 2013 00:45am
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13th Oct 2013 00:47am
13th Oct 2013 8:34am
Well done Hash. I really enjoyed this one..
it's refreshing to know that, or at least hope that, we have at least one person who would be there for us, no matter what.
it's refreshing to know that, or at least hope that, we have at least one person who would be there for us, no matter what.
13th Oct 2013 12:59pm
20th Oct 2013 9:36am
So meaningful to anyone who has surrendered to the support of another. Thank you!