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Alive~
Break me down
here's your chance
Carry me into space
make me see
while my eyes are closed
and your lips are covering mine
I wait in your touch
the hard softness
of your flesh inside mine
I crumble, I'm broken
You make me feel alive
here's your chance
Carry me into space
make me see
while my eyes are closed
and your lips are covering mine
I wait in your touch
the hard softness
of your flesh inside mine
I crumble, I'm broken
You make me feel alive
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 8:44pm
Favourite lines, convey the sense of Seventh Heaven:
Carry me into space
make me see
while my eyes are closed.
Carry me into space
make me see
while my eyes are closed.
11th Oct 2013 4:03am
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Apr 2019 1:35am
10th Oct 2013 10:27pm
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11th Oct 2013 3:07am
Absolutely beautiful! I love how, in a few words, you've expressed well the awesome deep feeling of making love. :)
11th Oct 2013 4:08am
Appreciate you reading GW...sometimes we forget how wonderful it is to make love... ;)
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13th Oct 2013 4:23pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 9:41pm
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