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Re: At last
9th Oct 2013 10:05pm
re: Re: At last
You have to tell me about your high school years, Kyky (or write some poems about them)! Thank you for stopping by, reading my little poem.
Re: At last
9th Oct 2013 11:00pm
the anger and hurt and
the bitter taste are pain
fully expressed, my friend...
I hope this
has
mend
ed.....x
the bitter taste are pain
fully expressed, my friend...
I hope this
has
mend
ed.....x
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re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:33am
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9th Oct 2013 11:14pm
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re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:38am
You know that I
mostly write about
things which concern
me somehow.
Fortunately
his dark poem isn't
about my feelings.
Thanks for caring, J.!
mostly write about
things which concern
me somehow.
Fortunately
his dark poem isn't
about my feelings.
Thanks for caring, J.!
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10th Oct 2013 00:37am
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re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:46am
That's what we try to achieve
by writing, that the readers
are caught between the lines.
Thank you, dear Vee,
who's Tiramisu poem is so absolutely
tasty!
by writing, that the readers
are caught between the lines.
Thank you, dear Vee,
who's Tiramisu poem is so absolutely
tasty!
Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 4:41am
re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:48am
Thank you, Sara for stopping by and reading!
Sometimes feelings
have to be
spit out!
Sometimes feelings
have to be
spit out!
Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 4:47am
the smile is a weak barricade against her agony. your poem needs to be hugged & comforted...
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re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:54am
Oh, so sweet words, John. They are
indeed comforting!
A smile is a good barricade to protect yourself against adversitiers from the outside.
But against your own deeply hidden feelings
which need to be released sometimes
it will not work.
indeed comforting!
A smile is a good barricade to protect yourself against adversitiers from the outside.
But against your own deeply hidden feelings
which need to be released sometimes
it will not work.
Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:49am
The joyless smile. The silent suffering that is often the worst kind of suffering. "Bloodless wounds" could symbolize the type of damage this kind of internal stress creates. A bleeding wound can be merciful in comparison. Gotta let that hurt & anger out somehow. It's good for your health, even if your grievances are only heard by thin air. A lot of thought & emotion you've packed into this. I feel it.
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re: Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 7:58am
Thank you so much for stopping by and giving this poem such an earnest consideration. You are so right. A smile without any further mimical expression can reveal much more hurt and pain than tears and shouting. I'm glad that you feel it!
Re: At last
10th Oct 2013 11:26am
Oh my sweet sweet lady... This hurts to read
you have my shoulder n ear anytime you need it
remember that ok?
you have my shoulder n ear anytime you need it
remember that ok?
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Oh yesyesyes! Hug me, please!!!
Thank you so much, Poe, for offering me some of your bodyparts :-)! I like that!
Thank you so much, Poe, for offering me some of your bodyparts :-)! I like that!
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11th Oct 2013 4:17pm
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re: Re: At last
12th Oct 2013 2:41pm
Thank you so much, Lena, I'm glad you like it and can feel what I wanted to express!
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13th Oct 2013 10:49pm
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re: Re: At last
It's always good to
relieve dammed feelings
from time to time.
Thank you so much, Gabriel!
relieve dammed feelings
from time to time.
Thank you so much, Gabriel!