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LIAR
I sat with the devil...
he told me
there was no saving myself
I was too far gone
no hope.
Looked me right in the eye
and smiled
with that crooked grin
and those beady eyes...
full of lies.
That's when I said,
I don't believe you!
You're the devil.
he told me
there was no saving myself
I was too far gone
no hope.
Looked me right in the eye
and smiled
with that crooked grin
and those beady eyes...
full of lies.
That's when I said,
I don't believe you!
You're the devil.
Published 7th Oct 2013
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7th Oct 2013 4:33pm
7th Oct 2013 5:19pm
7th Oct 2013 4:54pm
Love this poem. Just one thing.. In that last line, the "your" should be "you're". Otherwise great write!
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7th Oct 2013 5:38pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
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7th Oct 2013 8:55pm
Out of the depths of the Darkness--away from Temptations--we need only our beliefs, and our hope-lites,to guide us!
Inspirational Ink!
Sioch`ain leat...mo cara
Inspirational Ink!
Sioch`ain leat...mo cara
7th Oct 2013 10:38pm
7th Oct 2013 10:13pm
God will always see us through no matter what we are going through. Great write
7th Oct 2013 10:40pm
8th Oct 2013 00:06am
Yea, the devil is a liar n I'm glad he can't trick you bro!
Short but Powerful ink here :)
Short but Powerful ink here :)
8th Oct 2013 00:24am
Yes he is a liar and his pants are on fire. lol...peace and love to you always.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 6:32am
OOweee....I just love this, hashman!
The devil is a mighty LIAR! Xo
Pen Praise~
The devil is a mighty LIAR! Xo
Pen Praise~
8th Oct 2013 8:34pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:52pm
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8th Oct 2013 8:36pm