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It's a rambling man I am
and I held a throat in my hand today
begging for a reason to squeeze it
a quick fix to ease the anger a little
then wondered
what it is about time
that it always seems to screw me from behind
oh, it's not that I don't put up a fight
but taking on the universe is a full time struggle
I'm rambling
I met a rambler once
it was early in the morning as the dew shone
mushroom season
anyone and everyone who knew
were up that mountain picking the shrooms
nice chap, yank on holiday
nice chaps are easy enough to come by
it's a shame the bad'uns seem to multiply
like gremlins sprayed with water
something tells me that there's far too many clocks
in this dammed world
we're all slaves to the bastards
time is money
and countless other cliches that say the same thing
I think it's true what they say about the middle one though
god knows I'm a walking poster father for it
there's a wall building
I know it, sure I built one myself at his age
chances are I'll find the tools
to at least make a window
had to take some power tools out of my fathers shed
in case he had any thoughts of using them
took a fall last week, he's not the same y'know
we've talked about it, my brothers and I
it'll be grand
and that's the thing
the noise of the grandfather clock
echos's through the house
meticulous
maddening
finite
begging for a reason to squeeze it
a quick fix to ease the anger a little
then wondered
what it is about time
that it always seems to screw me from behind
oh, it's not that I don't put up a fight
but taking on the universe is a full time struggle
I'm rambling
I met a rambler once
it was early in the morning as the dew shone
mushroom season
anyone and everyone who knew
were up that mountain picking the shrooms
nice chap, yank on holiday
nice chaps are easy enough to come by
it's a shame the bad'uns seem to multiply
like gremlins sprayed with water
something tells me that there's far too many clocks
in this dammed world
we're all slaves to the bastards
time is money
and countless other cliches that say the same thing
I think it's true what they say about the middle one though
god knows I'm a walking poster father for it
there's a wall building
I know it, sure I built one myself at his age
chances are I'll find the tools
to at least make a window
had to take some power tools out of my fathers shed
in case he had any thoughts of using them
took a fall last week, he's not the same y'know
we've talked about it, my brothers and I
it'll be grand
and that's the thing
the noise of the grandfather clock
echos's through the house
meticulous
maddening
finite
Written by
lepperochan
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Published 4th Oct 2013
| Edited 5th Oct 2013
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4th Oct 2013 7:22pm
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re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
4th Oct 2013 11:11pm
Aish, me ol' flower
yeah, I think I could have probably rambled on indefinitely had I not got distracted by a light bulb.
poster father, thanks
glad to have caught your pupils missus, thank you kindly for the drop by and thoughts
yeah, I think I could have probably rambled on indefinitely had I not got distracted by a light bulb.
poster father, thanks
glad to have caught your pupils missus, thank you kindly for the drop by and thoughts
Re: It's a rambling man I am
4th Oct 2013 8:30pm
a fine meditation for preoccupant mind[mine] of aging unto finity....
lived with my daddy for final 11months of his finity. him only 22yrs older'n me people thought I was his brother....any'way...was at his side for 2 amputations & several incidents of of dialysis ports rupturing gushers, & the 3x/week dialysis sessions themselves.
I was grateful to be there for every moment.
But it sure took 'it' out of whatever-is-left-of 'me' as regards how untenable we've made our collective existence in compulsively groping to make our 'individual' selfs comfortable & distracted from acceptance of our unknowable end.........
or, maybe i'm mistaken
nice poom kid....guess it kinda hit me where I allegedly 'live.
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re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
4th Oct 2013 11:17pm
Danny Bhoy
shit man, I'm sorry to hear that, but somewhat lifted by your resolve and general outlook.
you are certainly a stute, thank you for leaving your thoughts man, much appreciated
shit man, I'm sorry to hear that, but somewhat lifted by your resolve and general outlook.
you are certainly a stute, thank you for leaving your thoughts man, much appreciated
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4th Oct 2013 11:50pm
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13th Oct 2013 10:55pm
Crims,
feelin the love miss, couple of different hiddens in this one, I'm sure you've found them already
hope you didn't have too much digging to do for my rare gems
thanks for the drop-by and words Miss, sorry 'bout the delayed reply
feelin the love miss, couple of different hiddens in this one, I'm sure you've found them already
hope you didn't have too much digging to do for my rare gems
thanks for the drop-by and words Miss, sorry 'bout the delayed reply
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13th Oct 2013 10:57pm
Vee
I can live with that if you can :)
happy you came by for a look see, and dropped your thoughts
(see above for apology)
I can live with that if you can :)
happy you came by for a look see, and dropped your thoughts
(see above for apology)
Re: It's a rambling man I am
5th Oct 2013 8:40am
Thanks for sharing your rambles - agree with them. Feels like we had a conversation, and left me feeling like one of those geezers who sits around, observing and nodding...
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13th Oct 2013 11:00pm
Takti
ah you're a geezah now, I blame society, why only last week you were a kitten.
cheers for the eyes n ears, and the words. much appreciated
ah you're a geezah now, I blame society, why only last week you were a kitten.
cheers for the eyes n ears, and the words. much appreciated
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re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
13th Oct 2013 11:03pm
Miki
far too kind you be, but if you feel like mentioning me on your next radio gig I'll not be complaining
thanks for the good words Miss, always nice to see you about
far too kind you be, but if you feel like mentioning me on your next radio gig I'll not be complaining
thanks for the good words Miss, always nice to see you about
Re: It's a rambling man I am
6th Oct 2013 6:03am
Dug the drive around, Lepp, a little of this and a little of that adds up to a whole lot of makes the world go round.
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13th Oct 2013 11:10pm
Tony
glad you liked it, tries something a little different, seems to have worked out ok
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your brain print
glad you liked it, tries something a little different, seems to have worked out ok
thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving your brain print
Re: It's a rambling man I am
9th Oct 2013 3:41pm
re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
13th Oct 2013 11:11pm
Spanker
good for you man, glad you got tickled
thanks for the drop-by and words
good for you man, glad you got tickled
thanks for the drop-by and words
Re: It's a rambling man I am
10th Oct 2013 3:58am
re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
13th Oct 2013 11:14pm
Gg
I'll bear that in mind the next time I feel like a rambling
cheers, big ears. keep coming back, it works, it works, it works
I'll bear that in mind the next time I feel like a rambling
cheers, big ears. keep coming back, it works, it works, it works
Re: It's a rambling man I am
30th Oct 2013 7:24am
you're a modest man when you write yet your dominance seeps through the spaces between the i's and you's.. mmmmm i like the taste of reading you . had a mad fucking crush on you when i got here too.. lol remember the poen i wrote about stalking and kidnapping you ? i read it once in a while and think.."boy i appreciate how he didn't burst my bubble about it" thank you eamon .. much love ..
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2nd Nov 2013 10:07pm
Miss Lucifer. I can feel the heat from here. and having looked out my window I can tell you that the army are driving around warning everybody to stay indoors 'lest we get fried. you're in my prayers you angel of darkness, God loves you y'know?
thank you for dripping by, Lady. The Irish for hazing
thank you for dripping by, Lady. The Irish for hazing
Re: It's a rambling man I am
2nd Nov 2013 7:51pm
Well, I need to replace one rambler with another rambler.
I think the beginning and the end were strong and it was all carefully linked with time and smooth rambling thoughts in the middle.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
I think the beginning and the end were strong and it was all carefully linked with time and smooth rambling thoughts in the middle.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
25th Nov 2013 10:10am
Case
terrible sorry m'man, this keeps happening to me. I follow nearly 70 poets so my notifications almost alwsys drown out comments made
thanks millions for giving my shit a chance, I can only hope not to disapoint
terrible sorry m'man, this keeps happening to me. I follow nearly 70 poets so my notifications almost alwsys drown out comments made
thanks millions for giving my shit a chance, I can only hope not to disapoint
Re: It's a rambling man I am
25th Nov 2013 9:39am
"You're a modest man when you write" says Devilish ... I entirely agree. I love your writing, man. Somehow your words just easily slip through the air; you're not whining, shouting, explaining. It's a helluva neat trick, eh. Hey, not sure about this word: echos's? Did you mean echoes? Dunno.
Look, I won't pretend I wasn't moved entirely by the subject matter, but the best story poorly told gets lost, whereas this cleverly worded piece gently hits home. Nice work.
Look, I won't pretend I wasn't moved entirely by the subject matter, but the best story poorly told gets lost, whereas this cleverly worded piece gently hits home. Nice work.
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re: Re: It's a rambling man I am
25th Nov 2013 10:00am
ah Kaatho,
god bless your eyesight Lady, I've been up and down those worfs countless times looking for errors 'cos I used my phone for this one. ..missed echos's rach time ..perhaps its a word :)
as for the rest ..you smooth talker you, dinner it is then :)
thanks for dropping by, dear Lady. and leaving your thoughts
god bless your eyesight Lady, I've been up and down those worfs countless times looking for errors 'cos I used my phone for this one. ..missed echos's rach time ..perhaps its a word :)
as for the rest ..you smooth talker you, dinner it is then :)
thanks for dropping by, dear Lady. and leaving your thoughts
Re: It's a rambling man I am
24th Dec 2013 3:32am