Commenting Preference:
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
29th Sep 2013 9:47pm
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re: Re: Once - Haiku
29th Sep 2013 10:17pm
Dear Carlene, thank you so much for the wonderful and insightful comment. You are so right, we have to answer for what we do, some time. And if it's not vengeance which someone takes, it's surely a debt we have to pay. Everything's balanced somehow. xo
Re: Once - Haiku
29th Sep 2013 10:27pm
re: Re: Once - Haiku
29th Sep 2013 11:24pm
Although the tenor's sad,
the stem will recover,
though the buds ...
Thank you, dart!
the stem will recover,
though the buds ...
Thank you, dart!
re: Re: Once - Haiku
29th Sep 2013 11:21pm
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30th Sep 2013 1:10am
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Re: Once - Haiku
30th Sep 2013 10:49am
A very uniquely composed
sad ink...however, it was exceptionally penned! :)
sad ink...however, it was exceptionally penned! :)
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30th Sep 2013 4:45pm
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re: Re: Once - Haiku
30th Sep 2013 5:22pm
Thank you so much, nopoetiknow *blush* ... I'm glad you like it and although it's only 14 words it's at least 17 syllables which tell the "story". The Japanese are famous for haikus! Perhaps its my blood group, predominantly for asian people, that makes me so fond of them :-).
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1st Oct 2013 5:31pm
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re: Re: Once - Haiku
1st Oct 2013 8:47pm
You're right. It will always come back. Stronger than before. Much appreciate your comment, J.!