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Glued gloom.
Darkness has a
sea thru me
darker than papa's coat ever
stinging male's
scent into pockets
eyes lacerate thru paper
...sounds roll wall,the
pyre burning
calm
i smell grey black
pump and drag out breathe
blue cottons,depressing exhale
Yes i've peace but
darker till no more it can loan grey
i stare woman
woods loaded head
same used for corpse,perhaps!
a strange prayer of evening
that has no peril pilfered
but a sweaty sun in
her burnt skin.
sea thru me
darker than papa's coat ever
stinging male's
scent into pockets
eyes lacerate thru paper
...sounds roll wall,the
pyre burning
calm
i smell grey black
pump and drag out breathe
blue cottons,depressing exhale
Yes i've peace but
darker till no more it can loan grey
i stare woman
woods loaded head
same used for corpse,perhaps!
a strange prayer of evening
that has no peril pilfered
but a sweaty sun in
her burnt skin.
Published 28th Sep 2013
| Edited 29th Sep 2013
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29th Sep 2013 3:04am
It would seen as though you've truly become one with gloom. Quite the sorrowful piece. It was written quite well. If you ever need someone to talk to , I'm here for you Rakhi
29th Sep 2013 5:25pm
I shall be tis way probably for 2 years
i left Delhi tis year
nothing here at my place can
keep me sane enough
i lost lost lost it,
the girl,
the sun,
the civil lines,
the roads undying in its every turn,
the shops,
the people,
the metro stations,
everything
Thankyou for asking E:)
i left Delhi tis year
nothing here at my place can
keep me sane enough
i lost lost lost it,
the girl,
the sun,
the civil lines,
the roads undying in its every turn,
the shops,
the people,
the metro stations,
everything
Thankyou for asking E:)
29th Sep 2013 7:27pm
Its seems as though nothing brings you happiness and you're lost in the realm of sadness. No interest is drawn to your eyes in a world seeming colorless. Its always a perspective I wish to escape from but can't these days it seems. I have faith you'll find something that will fill you with vivid color.
You're most welcome :)
You're most welcome :)
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29th Sep 2013 5:17pm
tis' the best comment i've ever received,
to put words into someone's piece is not just words
but a touch that has eyes and soul in it
.
Can't never be thankful fully Mou...
to put words into someone's piece is not just words
but a touch that has eyes and soul in it
.
Can't never be thankful fully Mou...