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You Seriously, Can't Be Serious,,,,,
Don't make me laugh,
I want all of you,
not only half.
You gotta be,
shitting me.
Do I look dumb
to you?
Do you think you're
soo fucking smart?
Here's the 'finger',
for your delusions.
Stick it up where the sun,
doesn't give radiation.
Your sick in your mind,
and probably have shit
for brains.
I'm not your slave,
you idiot.
Tie yourself with your
own chain.
Oh you forgot,
the location of the keys.
That's not my problem,
you see.
You aren't the first.
You aren't the last.
So do me a big favor,
and take your head out
your ass.
I confessed
something,
that I truly felt.
You laughed,
and asked if I would mind...
share?
You are just a complete idiot.
I'm more in disbelief,
than furious.
I would have never thought you'd
say some thing like that!!
You seriously, couldn't be serious...
I want all of you,
not only half.
You gotta be,
shitting me.
Do I look dumb
to you?
Do you think you're
soo fucking smart?
Here's the 'finger',
for your delusions.
Stick it up where the sun,
doesn't give radiation.
Your sick in your mind,
and probably have shit
for brains.
I'm not your slave,
you idiot.
Tie yourself with your
own chain.
Oh you forgot,
the location of the keys.
That's not my problem,
you see.
You aren't the first.
You aren't the last.
So do me a big favor,
and take your head out
your ass.
I confessed
something,
that I truly felt.
You laughed,
and asked if I would mind...
share?
You are just a complete idiot.
I'm more in disbelief,
than furious.
I would have never thought you'd
say some thing like that!!
You seriously, couldn't be serious...
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Re: You Seriously, Can't Be Serious,,,,,
28th Sep 2013 1:13am
Heck yes. I love this a lot of people need to do what you write.
And its so turthfull. I can honestly saw I could feel what you felt while reading you work.
And its so turthfull. I can honestly saw I could feel what you felt while reading you work.
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29th Sep 2013 1:19am
Anonymous
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29th Sep 2013 4:36am
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re: Re: You Seriously, Can't Be Serious,,,,,
29th Sep 2013 4:55am
lmao... Thanks!
I was trying not to be too balsy. jeje...
I glad you like it!
XD
I was trying not to be too balsy. jeje...
I glad you like it!
XD
Re: You Seriously, Can't Be Serious,,,,,
29th Sep 2013 4:44am
Not to offend but the venom in this write reminded me of, believe it or not, the Monkees singing "I'm Not Your Stepping Stone".
There is real, direct, face to face feel here that gives this write a sense of authenticity.
There is real, direct, face to face feel here that gives this write a sense of authenticity.
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re: Re: You Seriously, Can't Be Serious,,,,,
29th Sep 2013 4:56am
Offense not taken...
and I like that song!!
lol.
Thank you JazzManor
and I like that song!!
lol.
Thank you JazzManor
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29th Sep 2013 5:02am
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Apr 2019 1:35am
29th Sep 2013 7:21am
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