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The proposition
From across the room, I feel your desirous eyes,
they follow my every move, barely disguised.
Out of the corner of my eye I watch you too;
I wonder what will happen if you cross the room.
The hunger is obvious in your eyes;
it leaves no doubt as to the intentions
you harbor on this beautiful night.
Positively indecent as you undress me with your eyes,
asking in silence will I grant you my feminine delights.
There is nothing more seductive to a woman
than the open lusty admirations of a man.
My body feels caressed without as much as a touch.
Unseemly? Maybe, but I find myself wanting you just as much.
I walk out on to the dance floor while a sexy bachata is playing,
dancing alone for your benefit, my hips are gently swaying.
You risk being improper and make your move
taking a position, like a matador gracefully in tune.
You bring my body in close, hand on the small of my back,
turning me effortlessly until I am roped into your arms,
now, you inhale deep the perfume wafting from my neck.
The seduction is thick, absolutely intoxicating, I swear;
a licentious affair smells so much better
when there is a element of danger in the air.
You lock eyes with me, mesmerizing, my permission you seek,
your lips come close … “If I steal a kiss, will you slap me?”
(smiling coquettishly) That would be rude, don’t you think?
That was all the consent you needed, the first kiss
was sweetly inebriating as we continued to dance.
“I want to seduce and disrespect you in the sexiest ways” you said,
looking at your roguish smile, any denial I might have had melts away.
This tropical night beckons with all manner of
indelicate, lewd and inappropriate behaviors;
as we danced he says: “ How about if steal you away,
and I map every curve of your body with my fingertips and tongue?”
“I want to fog up the windows in my car,
discovering all the impolite ways I can get to know you”
“Would you think it an indecent proposal?”
It is too late, in his arms I am lost, before this night is over
I will have accepted his deliciously explicit offer.
Some nights are so perfect for the most
unbecoming yet sensual propositions…
Gypsy Red
they follow my every move, barely disguised.
Out of the corner of my eye I watch you too;
I wonder what will happen if you cross the room.
The hunger is obvious in your eyes;
it leaves no doubt as to the intentions
you harbor on this beautiful night.
Positively indecent as you undress me with your eyes,
asking in silence will I grant you my feminine delights.
There is nothing more seductive to a woman
than the open lusty admirations of a man.
My body feels caressed without as much as a touch.
Unseemly? Maybe, but I find myself wanting you just as much.
I walk out on to the dance floor while a sexy bachata is playing,
dancing alone for your benefit, my hips are gently swaying.
You risk being improper and make your move
taking a position, like a matador gracefully in tune.
You bring my body in close, hand on the small of my back,
turning me effortlessly until I am roped into your arms,
now, you inhale deep the perfume wafting from my neck.
The seduction is thick, absolutely intoxicating, I swear;
a licentious affair smells so much better
when there is a element of danger in the air.
You lock eyes with me, mesmerizing, my permission you seek,
your lips come close … “If I steal a kiss, will you slap me?”
(smiling coquettishly) That would be rude, don’t you think?
That was all the consent you needed, the first kiss
was sweetly inebriating as we continued to dance.
“I want to seduce and disrespect you in the sexiest ways” you said,
looking at your roguish smile, any denial I might have had melts away.
This tropical night beckons with all manner of
indelicate, lewd and inappropriate behaviors;
as we danced he says: “ How about if steal you away,
and I map every curve of your body with my fingertips and tongue?”
“I want to fog up the windows in my car,
discovering all the impolite ways I can get to know you”
“Would you think it an indecent proposal?”
It is too late, in his arms I am lost, before this night is over
I will have accepted his deliciously explicit offer.
Some nights are so perfect for the most
unbecoming yet sensual propositions…
Gypsy Red
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25th Sep 2013 5:53pm
Check this one out SW see how you like it. lol
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/111885-out-of-sight/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/111885-out-of-sight/
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The narrative is addictive. My only struggle here is that with the switch in verb tenses and the quotations, I got lost a couple of times.
Did make me regret sticking to the instruments and not learning much in terms of how to dance.
Did make me regret sticking to the instruments and not learning much in terms of how to dance.
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25th Sep 2013 2:41am
Lol sorry Jazzy, I love dancing it is one of my passions next to music and reading. :-) Thanks for reading.
Red
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Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 6:00am
Red, you are so gifted with your craft of poetry. Your erotica has so much passion and sensuality to it! Beautiful proposition my dear! Xo
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25th Sep 2013 4:45pm
My lovely Rain, the best part is that all of my erotica has a lot of my life in it, experiences and adventures :)Thank you sweet one!
Red
Red
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25th Sep 2013 4:22pm
Indeed "Some nights are perfect for the most unbecoming yet sensual propositions" -These are where contented sighs come from- Beautiful Write Dear Red!!!
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25th Sep 2013 4:48pm
Indeed my wonderful Soul, sigh worthy to say the least!Thank you so much my friend, stay tuned, this is one of a series of 3 poems along the same lines!
Red
Red
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25th Sep 2013 6:24pm
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25th Sep 2013 4:58pm
Sounds like indecent proposal to me...whew it's so hot my friend! Never experienced it in a car though. In my younger days, we don't have cars back home, just a calesa and sled (LOL)! I freaking love it!!!
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25th Sep 2013 5:38pm
Well hell Vic that's one for the bucket list try it you might like it lol It is fun, its one of those things that makes you feel young and naughty again! lol Thank you love.
Red
Red
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25th Sep 2013 7:28pm
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26th Sep 2013 5:08pm
Your inspiration is infectious......
I never Tangoed in the car or screwed a woman on the bar
But yes it happened once or twice and have to say that it was nice
Where a beauty that I met by chance ended in a better dance.
I never Tangoed in the car or screwed a woman on the bar
But yes it happened once or twice and have to say that it was nice
Where a beauty that I met by chance ended in a better dance.
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26th Sep 2013 7:45pm
It's fun to be naughty and wild life is too short not to go with an urge every now and then. Lol
Thanks PS glad you enjoyed this piece!
Red
Thanks PS glad you enjoyed this piece!
Red
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26th Sep 2013 9:55pm
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26th Sep 2013 10:46pm
Hey my sis, thank you glad you liked it so happy to see around these parts!
Red
Red
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18th Oct 2013 00:52am