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Death Spin
Sometimes I feel like
I'm thrown into the dark.
No words,no looks,no love
nothing from you
but then at times
all I have to do is knock
and you open your heart,
tell me your secrets,
listen to my words,
give me your love.
up and down,in and out,
black and white,here and there
you got me coming and going.
I say..."no more"
and your at my door,
covering me with your eyes
grabbing me with your smell
putting me in a death spin
with your words.
What can I say...
but "come on in".
Here we go again.
I'm thrown into the dark.
No words,no looks,no love
nothing from you
but then at times
all I have to do is knock
and you open your heart,
tell me your secrets,
listen to my words,
give me your love.
up and down,in and out,
black and white,here and there
you got me coming and going.
I say..."no more"
and your at my door,
covering me with your eyes
grabbing me with your smell
putting me in a death spin
with your words.
What can I say...
but "come on in".
Here we go again.
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24th Sep 2013 10:29pm
Your the best miki...gonna burn one in your honor right now...always smile :) (thanks for reading)
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25th Sep 2013 12:49pm
My bro. This is probably the very best piece I've ever read about the up n down of a complicated yet loving relationship... It's a FAV!
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27th Sep 2013 5:07pm
Stop.............Don’t.........Stop.....Don’t.....Stop...Don’t..Stop..Don’t..Stop.Don’tStopDon’tStopDon’tStop......
Good Write Hash....
Good Write Hash....
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