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More?
you want more?
from me?
what if
what if I don't have MORE to give?
what if
what if I'm not right for you or it's the other way around?
what if
what if you bring more pain than happiness into my life?
or what if
what if things aren't working out 'cause we were never meant to be?
from me?
what if
what if I don't have MORE to give?
what if
what if I'm not right for you or it's the other way around?
what if
what if you bring more pain than happiness into my life?
or what if
what if things aren't working out 'cause we were never meant to be?
Published 24th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 7:45pm
24th Sep 2013 7:22pm
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24th Sep 2013 8:05pm
24th Sep 2013 7:54pm
If there is one thing that leaves you questioning its love the what if are always endless even if your already happily in love
kudos...
kudos...
24th Sep 2013 8:07pm
24th Sep 2013 8:49pm
24th Sep 2013 8:02pm
Life focused on what if's can be stiffling! Good write--reminder to me in a couple of ways!
NIK
NIK
24th Sep 2013 8:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:57pm
24th Sep 2013 8:07pm
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24th Sep 2013 8:14pm
Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 8:23pm
I was told to try let go and experience new possibilities by my guy friend today.
This reminded me of the convo.
A nice, relateable write Hyacinth :)
This reminded me of the convo.
A nice, relateable write Hyacinth :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
24th Sep 2013 10:34pm
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24th Sep 2013 11:40pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Jun 2018 7:37pm
24th Sep 2013 11:24pm
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24th Sep 2013 11:42pm
25th Sep 2013 11:21am
I love the questioning in your piece N the responses to it
Looks like you struck a cord lol... As for Shadoe's comment
Although I bring a hopeless romantic agree, the other side of me thinks, "the heart is simply selfish in what it wants, n
has misled many, many a time...still becuz I'm
a HR, I'd try n overlook the what ifs! lol
Excellent write sweetheart :)
Looks like you struck a cord lol... As for Shadoe's comment
Although I bring a hopeless romantic agree, the other side of me thinks, "the heart is simply selfish in what it wants, n
has misled many, many a time...still becuz I'm
a HR, I'd try n overlook the what ifs! lol
Excellent write sweetheart :)
25th Sep 2013 1:44pm
Haha,I was just simply asking what was on my mind. Thank you for commenting,Poe. It's always appreciated (: