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Woman with curves - a Limerick, spontaneous collaboration with jagracia. That was fun!
There once was a woman with curves
who liked all the men who she served.
She went down on them all
queued up in the hall
getting all just what they deserved.
who liked all the men who she served.
She went down on them all
queued up in the hall
getting all just what they deserved.
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published 23rd Sep 2013
| Edited 27th Sep 2013
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Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaborati
23rd Sep 2013 7:01pm
re: Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaborati
And just because I asked if the word "curve" is appropriate, too,
for the bends roads make
since we originally and innocently
talked about motorbikes.
Thanks, d., we love your comment :-).
for the bends roads make
since we originally and innocently
talked about motorbikes.
Thanks, d., we love your comment :-).
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23rd Sep 2013 7:18pm
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re: Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaboration wit
I'll pass your kind words on to my collab partner jagracia who did most of the work! Thank you from both of us!
Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaboration with ja
23rd Sep 2013 8:19pm
and here I thought I would be gifted with a collab. :( oh well
I guess I can only wish lol... Nice collab. You two :)
I guess I can only wish lol... Nice collab. You two :)
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re: Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaboration wit
Dear Poe, we surely could try! Although I can't say from your words if you'd rather collab. with either jagracia or with me :-). Thanks for your sweet words, we appreciate them much!
Re: Woman with curves - a Limmerick, spontaneous collaboration with ja
25th Sep 2013 9:04pm
Chi, it's a bawdy piece, what the limerick was designed for. but primarily I like to comment on your work for all the love you reward us with in your responses...
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Nice words for a bawdy limerick, JF. I will remember them. Thank you for your honest comment!
Some days later ... Have to add: At first I didn't get what you meant. Now that I understand I'd like to thank you for your kindness!
Some days later ... Have to add: At first I didn't get what you meant. Now that I understand I'd like to thank you for your kindness!
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26th Sep 2013 8:18pm
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re: Re: Woman with curves - a Limerick, spontaneous collaboration with
26th Sep 2013 8:31pm
Hi nopoetiknow! Thank you for stopping by and reading jagracia's and my naughty little ad hoc piece :-). And I'd like to thank you for your friendly and benevolent comment.
I could attach a pic of my bike to that poem ... Tell me, if you're interested, since J.'s and my motorbikes were the bone of contention.
I could attach a pic of my bike to that poem ... Tell me, if you're interested, since J.'s and my motorbikes were the bone of contention.
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26th Sep 2013 9:02pm
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26th Sep 2013 9:05pm
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Thanks a lot nopoetiknow. She's my Black Beauty :-). It's a BMW F 800 ST. And black, yes :-). That would be nice, taking some curves together. Or bends? Turns? Whatever ...
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