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.......

you really fucking think i give a shit?

mother fucker hits you like a brick,

think i give a shit what people would think?

fuck them, i am who, i am they can suck my.......

people say its best to just be honest,

so im telling you i like you,

do you do too?

not my business i just wanted to tell,

you that i like you, im just being honest,

really fucking sucks putting yourself out there,

being open, vulnerable, scared, do they really care,

i may be irish but im no fucking drinker,

people like my poems, been told im a deep thinker,

fuck that shit, i know what i want,

know what i like, wont be told different by any cunt,

you light my day when i read your message,

i love chatting with you,

i know you dont feel the same way as i do,

but thats the way it sits,

my as well be honest, had enough of this shit,

i cant think of much to write anymore,

just wanted to fill you in so you know the score,

so because i cant write i will become a ghost,

so for a while this is my last post,

i hope you enjoy as im left feeling open,

message is i like her, you, even though im shy,

cant help like her shes fun and amazing,

she doesnt even have to try,

goodbye sweet girl, and hope you all have a great day,

i know this poem is shit, but im saying i like her, in my own stupid way........
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