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Funeral night
That night,it rained to fill sin onto dark,
could feel throb of my heart spilling cold ill
lament covered moon like mosses screaming night's musk,
sting into eyes ghastly,aging light
and all i could smell was fever,heat.
could feel throb of my heart spilling cold ill
lament covered moon like mosses screaming night's musk,
sting into eyes ghastly,aging light
and all i could smell was fever,heat.
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Re: Funeral night
20th Sep 2013 12:54pm
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20th Sep 2013 3:30pm
It's an honour to receive such comments from you who was into writing from past 20 years:)
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20th Sep 2013 3:31pm
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20th Sep 2013 5:42pm
I'll admit that I wasn't aware
of your writings until I saw
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subscriptions, (I Thank You for
that as I always Consider it an
Priviledge when someone does
that), and I then read your
writings; some of them anyways so
far and I really enjoyed this one.
I look forward to being Enlightened
by many more of them.
Pan
of your writings until I saw
that you had added me to your
subscriptions, (I Thank You for
that as I always Consider it an
Priviledge when someone does
that), and I then read your
writings; some of them anyways so
far and I really enjoyed this one.
I look forward to being Enlightened
by many more of them.
Pan
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21st Sep 2013 2:32pm
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21st Sep 2013 2:31pm
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25th Sep 2013 10:47am
Such comments really helps one to grow and one relive i one's own pieces.
i'm grateful dear.
Ty:))
i'm grateful dear.
Ty:))
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