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Lasting Love
He blows the dust from my cover
while gently holding me bare,
his hand glides over my soft
outer shell,
I lean into his space connecting
our passion with hungry
wet breath,
Turning the pages I feel us
gathering together touching
freely,
His desire brings me to life
shadowing me in the most
perfect way,
I capture him in my words
embracing his panting
soul,
Closing the book as one,
lasting love in perfect
harmony.
while gently holding me bare,
his hand glides over my soft
outer shell,
I lean into his space connecting
our passion with hungry
wet breath,
Turning the pages I feel us
gathering together touching
freely,
His desire brings me to life
shadowing me in the most
perfect way,
I capture him in my words
embracing his panting
soul,
Closing the book as one,
lasting love in perfect
harmony.
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
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Always like when you comment Gabriel ...thank you my friend for reading! :)
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I have read this again and feel the poem connects powerfully with the picture. The book imagery inspires me to write a poem for this section, 'Like a Book'.
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