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Lullaby
When the cold lips of a murderer sing you to to sleep
Amidst a rain of ashes that falls in silence
Who does the storm of a single tear fall for?
When you awake to a grey dawn
Who tells the sun it can't cajole this deathly blizzard into new life
As it always has before
Amidst a rain of ashes that falls in silence
Who does the storm of a single tear fall for?
When you awake to a grey dawn
Who tells the sun it can't cajole this deathly blizzard into new life
As it always has before
Published 15th Sep 2013
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15th Sep 2013 9:07pm
Wow, you're on a roll...
Consider breaking up that last line? I'm biased towards short lines, I know, lol.
Consider breaking up that last line? I'm biased towards short lines, I know, lol.
15th Sep 2013 9:27pm
Thank you, is that any better now? Lol I know you are, but I ramble when I speak so I ramble when I write....even when I try not to.
15th Sep 2013 10:30pm
18th Sep 2013 2:46pm
