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Re: In vain
14th Sep 2013 9:52pm
several observations could be made regarding this poem, Chi. I'm going w/this one: let's just enjoy the act w/o signing a contract...
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Re: In vain
14th Sep 2013 10:05pm
I agree with you,JF, contracts we don't need. Hollow words either. I like your comment a lot.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
14th Sep 2013 10:56pm
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re: Re: In vain
14th Sep 2013 11:20pm
Thank you, Vee! Glad you enjoyed it! Sometimes those words should go in one ear and out the other.
Re: In vain
14th Sep 2013 11:05pm
whatever they were meant
to mean I'm guessing you
saw through them...
nice writing, Chi
to mean I'm guessing you
saw through them...
nice writing, Chi
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re: Re: In vain
14th Sep 2013 11:19pm
or...& it's just a thought...
was he just too short to
whisper sweet nothing's
in your ear..:)
was he just too short to
whisper sweet nothing's
in your ear..:)
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re: Re: In vain
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- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
15th Sep 2013 00:00am
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re: Re: In vain
15th Sep 2013 00:13am
Anonymous
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re: Re: In vain
15th Sep 2013 00:11am
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re: Re: In vain
15th Sep 2013 3:26pm
Exactly, Liz. Pondering about that I just decided to relish the words and to protect my heart, if possible. Thank you, dear friend for your kind feedback!
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- Edited 17th May 2018 11:45am
16th Sep 2013 3:24pm
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re: Re: In vain
:-). A refreshment as well as a kind comment are always welcome! Thank you, tornado!