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Cold Shower
Usually reserved for the boys
I had to take a cold shower today
Because I woke up burning hot
From you invading my dreams
But that cold shower
Didn’t really help at all
I closed my eyes
Letting the cool water flow over me
Envisioning
A cool water fall
Washing us clean
As we dance in the water
And taking a shower together
Where I could wash you head to toe
Start with your hair
Behind your ears
Down your back
I won’t forget the front
Sudsing you up
Gently caressing your legs
With the loofah
Maybe nip at your button
While I’m down there
And work my way back up top
Just for fun
I had to take a cold shower today
Because I woke up burning hot
From you invading my dreams
But that cold shower
Didn’t really help at all
I closed my eyes
Letting the cool water flow over me
Envisioning
A cool water fall
Washing us clean
As we dance in the water
And taking a shower together
Where I could wash you head to toe
Start with your hair
Behind your ears
Down your back
I won’t forget the front
Sudsing you up
Gently caressing your legs
With the loofah
Maybe nip at your button
While I’m down there
And work my way back up top
Just for fun
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2019 8:45pm
12th Sep 2013 4:42pm
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re: Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 4:43pm
Thank you. I think I could take this one further, but I'll think on that later :)
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Jan 2019 8:45pm
12th Sep 2013 4:47pm
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Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 4:56pm
That was good cold shower as it trickled my imagination just like the water flowing down from hesd to toe...I like warm showers though!
It would be nice if you can add more to it as you leave me hanging and begging for more.
It would be nice if you can add more to it as you leave me hanging and begging for more.
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re: Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 4:58pm
I will definitely be adding more...I may just have to go take another cold shower ;)
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 11:45am
12th Sep 2013 5:01pm
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12th Sep 2013 5:26pm
Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 6:09pm
Wow! This was xxciting Bloodytears.
If you get inspiration for scribes
like these in the cold shower then
Bravo for you.
Much enjoyed... Pan
If you get inspiration for scribes
like these in the cold shower then
Bravo for you.
Much enjoyed... Pan
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re: Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 6:25pm
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12th Sep 2013 6:35pm
I used to mow lawns when I was a teen-ager
after school for my own money and I remember
back then doing a lot of deep-thinking/musing.
And it's still that way now. Hmmh.
Pan
after school for my own money and I remember
back then doing a lot of deep-thinking/musing.
And it's still that way now. Hmmh.
Pan
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Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 7:38pm
Re: Cold Shower
12th Sep 2013 11:17pm
Daaaaaaaamn! I'm LOVIN' this! Nice hot and to the point..just the way I like it.
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