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Re: If
12th Sep 2013 11:26am
all those feelings
expressed in words
which are just right
for the telling...
great poem...
expressed in words
which are just right
for the telling...
great poem...
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re: Re: If
12th Sep 2013 11:34am
One always hopes
for the right words
to properly express
oneself.
Thank you kindly, dartford!
for the right words
to properly express
oneself.
Thank you kindly, dartford!
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Questions always matter, as where answers not always do.
Thank you, Vee for your very kind comment!
Thank you, Vee for your very kind comment!
Re: If
12th Sep 2013 2:53pm
Hhhhmmmm who am I? why I am of flesh n bone
cracked soul darkened by night where light once roamed...
Oh, excuse I went far left huh? lol anywho, very powerful in so few words lady! :)
cracked soul darkened by night where light once roamed...
Oh, excuse I went far left huh? lol anywho, very powerful in so few words lady! :)
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re: Re: If
12th Sep 2013 8:08pm
You're welcome to extend my little outburst, Poe :-). That's a good and dark contribution! Thank you!
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12th Sep 2013 3:38pm
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re: Re: If
12th Sep 2013 8:20pm
You always want to know who the man is, you're with? Let me tell you: Sometimes you don't. Anyway, I appreciate your sweet words! Thank you!
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re: Re: If
12th Sep 2013 8:15pm
You sensed the underlying mood, as always, J.. Let's pretend that forlornness and resignation belong to every relationship, at least once in a while. I feel honored by your comment.
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re: Re: If
12th Sep 2013 8:05pm
Ah, Liz, this will lead to nothing but heartache some day. The plot itself stays more or less the exciting same, whereas the side lines add more and more sadness and pain to the protagonists. But at least they(the side lines)help to keep the reader at it :-). Thank you deeply for your emotional support!
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re: Re: If
13th Sep 2013 9:55am
You're headed in the right direction, Carlene. But sometimes it's just what's required, although hard. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and questions with me! You know that I always appreciate your valuable comments.
Re: If
sex is 'joie de vivre' of course, the desired path to euphoria.
but the kiss...
(my heart trembles!) the kiss is Romance itself...
but the kiss...
(my heart trembles!) the kiss is Romance itself...
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Re: If
Such a romantic comment, JF! Thank you so much!
A kiss ...
the door to bliss,
I'd say...
A kiss ...
the door to bliss,
I'd say...
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re: Re: If
26th Sep 2013 8:48pm
WOW! I have to thank YOU for the so poetic and sexy comment in shape of yet another poem. You should publish it since it's lovely!
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