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The Landscape of Our love
Meet me at the foothills of your fantasy
Across the merry meadows of your mind
through the valleys of your vision
Where our worlds become entwined
We'll paddle down your stream of thought
To the shores of your serenity
I'll be a mirror to your soul
Reflecting your divinity
I'll sit and watch your every action
And lose myself beside you for a while
I want to catch the rays of your reactions
So i can feel the sunlight of your smile
We can escape together
Well fly off like a dove
To a place that is much better
On the landscape of our love
Across the merry meadows of your mind
through the valleys of your vision
Where our worlds become entwined
We'll paddle down your stream of thought
To the shores of your serenity
I'll be a mirror to your soul
Reflecting your divinity
I'll sit and watch your every action
And lose myself beside you for a while
I want to catch the rays of your reactions
So i can feel the sunlight of your smile
We can escape together
Well fly off like a dove
To a place that is much better
On the landscape of our love
Published 11th Sep 2013
| Edited 13th Sep 2013
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28th Oct 2013 11:36pm
6th Nov 2013 1:42am
Nice!? THIS IS FANTASTIC. I've read so many of your poems, and I am REALLY in love with your writing.
Honestly. I really like how you mixed the landscape with feelings.
Honestly. I really like how you mixed the landscape with feelings.
6th Nov 2013 3:53pm
