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Letting Go
In the wee hours of night
the memory of you trapped me,
I yearned to hear your voice,
to feel your touch
but reality hit and I had to
resign myself to the fact
that you would not fight
for our love,
our personal truth.
Everything in life
cannot be easy,
but you could not face
the challenges in your path,
so you just let what we shared
become one more thing
to lament in your past.
Now here I stand
with the mirage of what was
and the emptiness
it has become…
One more of life’s ironies,
the more you love,
the more vulnerable you become
and in the end
the devastation that’s left
is the only evidence
of the fiery passion
you brought into existence.
Gypsy Red
the memory of you trapped me,
I yearned to hear your voice,
to feel your touch
but reality hit and I had to
resign myself to the fact
that you would not fight
for our love,
our personal truth.
Everything in life
cannot be easy,
but you could not face
the challenges in your path,
so you just let what we shared
become one more thing
to lament in your past.
Now here I stand
with the mirage of what was
and the emptiness
it has become…
One more of life’s ironies,
the more you love,
the more vulnerable you become
and in the end
the devastation that’s left
is the only evidence
of the fiery passion
you brought into existence.
Gypsy Red
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9th Sep 2013 11:50pm
Yea, definitely true, " the more you love, the more vulernerable you become" that part really strikes hard
n clearly I can relate... Outstanding ink, n very sad too.
n clearly I can relate... Outstanding ink, n very sad too.
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9th Sep 2013 11:53pm
Yeah I know you too have suffered much my friend. Thank you for reading my piece.
Red
Red
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10th Sep 2013 1:34am
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10th Sep 2013 12:59pm
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10th Sep 2013 3:30am
...I tend to have a snarky disposition with that whole "better to have loved" thing...such Knowledge gained is better left to ignorance...if but one TRUE thing for myself is gained by this unwanted knowledge then all the hell is worth it...do's and donts ...don't count in my book...but introspective does. Mucho much depth as always with these dark writes Dear Red!!!-finessing the black
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10th Sep 2013 1:02pm
I would have agree with you Soul, to hell with that better to have known love crap! Thank you for passionate comment, I value highly your opinion. :-)
Red
Red
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10th Sep 2013 2:23pm
Letting go is the hardest part of being in love...no matter what, the bittersweet memories will always linger and that would be eating your heart out. But we won't know what's on the other fence if we don't try to move on and find out!
I always admire the style and craftmanship you put into each and everyone of your work...the words and images always complement each other to convey exactly what you're trying to express.
I always admire the style and craftmanship you put into each and everyone of your work...the words and images always complement each other to convey exactly what you're trying to express.
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Thank you very much Vic,I appreciate your kind words
and I always appreciate your wonderful comments. :-)
Red
and I always appreciate your wonderful comments. :-)
Red
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 00:43am
Damn! When you 'let go' you let go gorgeously! This piece is amazing, Red!
The way your words weaved into emotions that many of us have felt were flawless!
Pen Hug~
The way your words weaved into emotions that many of us have felt were flawless!
Pen Hug~
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Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 8:00pm
Wow, Red ... you hit the 300 meter target, dead on. Nicely done. The closing stanza brought it home.
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15th Sep 2013 00:27am
Hey if it isn't the the hotty colonel lol Thanks Mark wonderful to see your comment!
Red
Red
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17th Sep 2013 5:57pm
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17th Sep 2013 9:50pm
Absolutely, so true, sometimes we just have to let the light shine through.
Red
Red