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"Artificial Intelligence"
Altered after all that was nature given
Ridiculous reason being money driven
Those things worshipped material based
Insidious one's bemoaning ill placed
Foolish folk find the fool's gold
Indifferent view, robotic, cold
Cause and effect, will birth result
Incision, a poor decision at fault
An ass injected, collagen filled superficial
Lips, boobs silicon fuel it's all just nonsensical...
ARTIFICIAL...
Innate, a greater purpose to be great
Never any need of perpetuating hate
Thoughtful consideration...initiate
Everyone need to be one to elevate
Live, life, love this earth you populate
Lose lecherous ways, get positive state
It's like a puzzle, that we habituate
God given clues, driven to extrapolate
Easy, this testament true to stimulate
Nexus, this is the next us our destined fate
Consciously we need to strive and motivate
Else why even possess a mind to speculate...
INTELLIGENCE...
Ridiculous reason being money driven
Those things worshipped material based
Insidious one's bemoaning ill placed
Foolish folk find the fool's gold
Indifferent view, robotic, cold
Cause and effect, will birth result
Incision, a poor decision at fault
An ass injected, collagen filled superficial
Lips, boobs silicon fuel it's all just nonsensical...
ARTIFICIAL...
Innate, a greater purpose to be great
Never any need of perpetuating hate
Thoughtful consideration...initiate
Everyone need to be one to elevate
Live, life, love this earth you populate
Lose lecherous ways, get positive state
It's like a puzzle, that we habituate
God given clues, driven to extrapolate
Easy, this testament true to stimulate
Nexus, this is the next us our destined fate
Consciously we need to strive and motivate
Else why even possess a mind to speculate...
INTELLIGENCE...
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Re: "Artificial Intelligence"
9th Sep 2013 2:39pm
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9th Sep 2013 2:46pm
Gosh ur quick! I love that though lol thank you sweetheart
I'm so honored n humbled... :)
I'm so honored n humbled... :)
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9th Sep 2013 3:25pm
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9th Sep 2013 4:23pm
lol you think i did? aaawww well i was just tryin to get up to where you are! :) anywho? i'm grateful as always for the sweet commentary n support :)
Re: "Artificial Intelligence"
9th Sep 2013 4:04pm
Such a sharp write, Poe. Enjoyed it a lot! Would like to listen to a spoken version, too.
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9th Sep 2013 4:45pm
well you just may get ur wish l.o.l. thank you my sweetness...truly appreciate you...
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9th Sep 2013 4:48pm
i'll tell something i got from my mommy many moons ago... l.o.l.
she used to tell us she was BIG on ppl with common sense smarts, becuz many ppl with just book smarts were just plain damn dumb l.o.l. i know a bit harsh but usually it was directed at someone who just pissed her off! l.o.l. thank u my dearest lady... appreciate you much :)
she used to tell us she was BIG on ppl with common sense smarts, becuz many ppl with just book smarts were just plain damn dumb l.o.l. i know a bit harsh but usually it was directed at someone who just pissed her off! l.o.l. thank u my dearest lady... appreciate you much :)
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9th Sep 2013 4:58pm
AAAAWWWW, you sweet sweet woman! thank you! so were u referring to how i did the video reading or the
way i wrote it? l.o.l.
way i wrote it? l.o.l.
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9th Sep 2013 10:39pm
Thank you my sweetness! As always you have honored me n
humbled me... Appreciate you so much :)
humbled me... Appreciate you so much :)
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10th Sep 2013 3:14am
My brotha from Anotha , u humble me kid n I'm deeply grateful for your support always n ur gifted urself! :)
Re: "Artificial Intelligence"
11th Sep 2013 2:56am
Most Excellent Scribe Sir enjoyed the video as well "Foolish folk find the fool's gold
Indifferent view, robotic, cold" so true
love this part:
"Everyone need to be one to elevate
Live, life, love this earth you populate
Lose lecherous ways, get positive state
It's like a puzzle, that we habituate "
ahh so many great lines i could quote the whole thing ..Bravo :)i enjoyed
Indifferent view, robotic, cold" so true
love this part:
"Everyone need to be one to elevate
Live, life, love this earth you populate
Lose lecherous ways, get positive state
It's like a puzzle, that we habituate "
ahh so many great lines i could quote the whole thing ..Bravo :)i enjoyed
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11th Sep 2013 1:40pm
Dagg I wish u could put comments in a "greatest" list becuz this would go in it! lol thank you my precious one
I'm honored n humbled to be supported by you! :)
I'm honored n humbled to be supported by you! :)
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21st Dec 2013 6:25am
this is so awesome and well done! I love your poetry and hope to see more spoken word by you :)
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21st Dec 2013 12:43pm
Well, I forgot I did a video with this one lol, but I do have another n was considering adding video to some others so we'll see lol... I'm pleased you find my ink worthy of your time n thoughts, I thank u n appreciate you greatly :)