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mahasanni
mahasanni
you are mine
mine to hold
mine to love
mine to care for
and i am your hasanni
you lakota wimyan
your to hold
your to love
and your to care for
we have fought
i have defended you
we have grumbled
and we have loved
you are my partner
my lover
and i am yours
you are mine
mine to hold
mine to love
mine to care for
and i am your hasanni
you lakota wimyan
your to hold
your to love
and your to care for
we have fought
i have defended you
we have grumbled
and we have loved
you are my partner
my lover
and i am yours
Published 8th Sep 2013
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9th Sep 2013 00:45am
9th Sep 2013 1:41am
Anonymous
- Edited 13th May 2018 9:38pm
9th Sep 2013 1:44am
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9th Sep 2013 6:36am
Beautiful composition! Only thing I would change is add a few "s". Like "your to hold", will read better as "yours to hold".
13th Sep 2013 6:24pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
9th Sep 2013 3:31pm
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13th Sep 2013 6:24pm