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Like a daisy
She took her time
To thoroughly count the leaves
He loves me He loves me not
He loves me He loves me not
By the time she reached the end
All that was left was his heart
It didn't matter anymore
To thoroughly count the leaves
He loves me He loves me not
He loves me He loves me not
By the time she reached the end
All that was left was his heart
It didn't matter anymore
Published 5th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
5th Sep 2013 11:13pm
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5th Sep 2013 11:16pm
Perceptive my friend. Thank you! I apologize for not responding to your other comments. Real life and so on ;-)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
5th Sep 2013 11:49pm
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6th Sep 2013 00:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
6th Sep 2013 00:14am
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6th Sep 2013 00:33am
6th Sep 2013 1:25am
OH..soo sorrowful!
Indecision...fear of commitment...both can end soo tragically!
Penned With Pain on Parchment
Indecision...fear of commitment...both can end soo tragically!
Penned With Pain on Parchment
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
6th Sep 2013 2:33am
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8th Sep 2013 8:15am
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Feb 2019 4:35pm
9th Sep 2013 10:48pm
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10th Sep 2013 7:28pm
Hi Vee,
How nice to see how you can find your own way in my poem and like it. Welcome to my written world. I'll promise to visit yours
Ink
How nice to see how you can find your own way in my poem and like it. Welcome to my written world. I'll promise to visit yours
Ink
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 3:16pm
....but isn't that a good thing?! And I promise I haven't been sipping any wine, Chris! o_O
~mulling over this one for a while...Xo
Nice.....
~mulling over this one for a while...Xo
Nice.....
23rd Sep 2013 8:17pm