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re: Re: Haiku XXV
4th Sep 2013 9:46pm
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re: Re: Haiku XXV
4th Sep 2013 10:17pm
Yes, they possibly are. Souls sometimes seems to enjoy themselves in dreams :-). Glad you enjoyed!
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4th Sep 2013 10:19pm
as sensuous an image
as I've seen, in physicality
and feeling...great poem :)
as I've seen, in physicality
and feeling...great poem :)
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4th Sep 2013 10:38pm
Would love to respond adecuately, but can't since I don't know if my words made sense :-). All I can do is to thank you with all my heart for your kind words.
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re: Re: Haiku XXV
4th Sep 2013 10:43pm
You could make it a waking dream if you wanted. And those sleeping ones, they accompany and inspire you the whole day. Not bad, either!
Thanks, dear J.!
Thanks, dear J.!
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Re: Haiku XXV
5th Sep 2013 6:18am
Men would particularly relate to that description of waking up excited....but alone.
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5th Sep 2013 1:33pm
I know, Solomon! Though a woman, too, might awake excited after a sensual dream. And not necessarily alone :-).
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8th Sep 2013 9:53pm
awakening is when you really enjoy such a dream. for that brief moment...
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