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'360* Cipher'
These four walls
repetitously emotionless
gaze at me, simultaneously,
looking straight past me
with a solemn discontent
extending from paint cracked smiles,
as the floorboards sound- push thru
with their two cents worth...
creeking, creeping, sloth like
into the bowels of my gaited posture
leaving the all too familiar odor,
of time racing by...
ever preparing,
for the recurrent cycle to spin anew...
repetitously emotionless
gaze at me, simultaneously,
looking straight past me
with a solemn discontent
extending from paint cracked smiles,
as the floorboards sound- push thru
with their two cents worth...
creeking, creeping, sloth like
into the bowels of my gaited posture
leaving the all too familiar odor,
of time racing by...
ever preparing,
for the recurrent cycle to spin anew...
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Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 8:29pm
re: Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 8:31pm
So right you are, if doesn't lol thank you my dear Red one, appreciate you much! :)
Anonymous
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4th Sep 2013 8:41pm
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4th Sep 2013 11:23pm
Anonymous
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4th Sep 2013 9:07pm
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 11:46pm
Lol tell u what, u but the paint n I'll let you docthe repairs!
lol... Thank u my sweet friend, appreciate u much :)
lol... Thank u my sweet friend, appreciate u much :)
Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 9:51pm
ahhh the ending was perfection!! i really enjoyed this...convey many emotions..your words really came to life
*the four walls-gaze
*paint-smiles
*floorboards- adding their twocents
really gave this a surreal feel
*the four walls-gaze
*paint-smiles
*floorboards- adding their twocents
really gave this a surreal feel
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 11:49pm
Aaaawww my dear you commentaries are priceless! Thank you so much, I'm always n forever grateful :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
4th Sep 2013 10:05pm
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 11:51pm
knowing how deeply you wax the poetic
I'm clearly flattered by your words bro! Thank you so much
appreciate you much :)
I'm clearly flattered by your words bro! Thank you so much
appreciate you much :)
Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 10:05pm
re: Re: '360* Cipher'
4th Sep 2013 11:56pm
Under your skin huh? Like veins or something else? lol
Seriously though...truly appreciate you so much :)
Seriously though...truly appreciate you so much :)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
5th Sep 2013 1:15am
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
5th Sep 2013 3:06am
Wow that's cold! lol so u saying I got no life huh? lol
Thank you for the support n advice though lol
Thank you for the support n advice though lol
Re: '360* Cipher'
8th Sep 2013 1:20am
Im loving the psychological points of advantages of this
Pretty damn cool
Pretty damn cool
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
8th Sep 2013 2:16am
Wow, I'm very flattered by this comment! Thank you so much
it's truly n deeply appreciated... I will return the fav. soon :)
it's truly n deeply appreciated... I will return the fav. soon :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
8th Sep 2013 1:51am
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re: Re: '360* Cipher'
8th Sep 2013 2:18am
What you n I have in common
for certain? I love your sight full, intelligent pieces as much as you mine :) thank you my precious sweet friend :)
for certain? I love your sight full, intelligent pieces as much as you mine :) thank you my precious sweet friend :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 00:09am
8th Sep 2013 9:25pm
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