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She
Revolutionary preaching from
white black
her world flies like kite
across broken
clutching prayers
thorns full and strong on
rose temples across her warm lips
sun's cradling yellow need
frivolous drifts from bridge's
lullaby
crooked mirror cages her
beauty unspoiled attraction
luring caresses bury soul in
ever engulfing heart's ark
and beams escapes her
hair golden dilating
midnight's breezes
for art can't be carried but sailed
symphony echoing
on my bare chest.
white black
her world flies like kite
across broken
clutching prayers
thorns full and strong on
rose temples across her warm lips
sun's cradling yellow need
frivolous drifts from bridge's
lullaby
crooked mirror cages her
beauty unspoiled attraction
luring caresses bury soul in
ever engulfing heart's ark
and beams escapes her
hair golden dilating
midnight's breezes
for art can't be carried but sailed
symphony echoing
on my bare chest.
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re: Re: She
5th Sep 2013 12:47pm
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re: Re: She
5th Sep 2013 12:48pm
I was bit sad about this,thankyou for letting me know it worked :))
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Re: She
6th Sep 2013 5:27am
"for art can't be carried but sailed"
how? how are you doing this? lol
what a wonderful write!
how? how are you doing this? lol
what a wonderful write!
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re: Re: She
6th Sep 2013 8:54am
Ooo,Dennis i so missed your comments,next time I'll try to drag out the beast within;(,just my 10.8 cents.
Re: She
8th Sep 2013 1:43pm
the last 4 lines are brilliant. great poem with a very strong ending. i look forward to reading more of your work. "art can't be carried but sailed" - amen amen
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8th Sep 2013 3:41pm
Wowa,those were really encouraging
definitely you'll see more
much appreciated John_Paul:))
definitely you'll see more
much appreciated John_Paul:))