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Memories Drowned Out By Life
The fading has started
I cannot recall, certain things
regarding him
it feels good
but I also feel a bit cheated
I liked the darkness of the memory
the dull pain of healing
kinda like pressing on a bruise
it hurts but in a good way
then it dissipates
but you push on it anyways just to see
nothing, it's gone
I cannot recall, certain things
regarding him
it feels good
but I also feel a bit cheated
I liked the darkness of the memory
the dull pain of healing
kinda like pressing on a bruise
it hurts but in a good way
then it dissipates
but you push on it anyways just to see
nothing, it's gone
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- Edited 15th May 2018 9:39pm
3rd Sep 2013 9:46pm
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Re: Memories Drowned Out By Life
3rd Sep 2013 11:05pm
Indeed-that is the final step in the sadness-realizing the missing sting--Awesome Write Nikki
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3rd Sep 2013 11:33pm
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4th Sep 2013 00:26am
i like the process. how you build it up the whole way but then at the end jus brush it off your shoulders..........thas tricky mam.....
well done miss nikki.....
well done miss nikki.....
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Re: Memories Drowned Out By Life
4th Sep 2013 5:55am
great write
felt your words and the emotions
have pushed that bruise a few times myself
felt your words and the emotions
have pushed that bruise a few times myself
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- Edited 12th Jul 2018 3:39am
4th Sep 2013 3:58pm
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- Edited 14th May 2018 10:03pm
5th Sep 2013 7:33pm
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24th Oct 2013 5:17am
What-Ever, Nikkimoe, this jerk did not deserve you, he wants to hurt you with goodbyes, no, good riddance, you are the greatest in the fervent eyes of most all who tread your words and deeds.
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Re: Memories Drowned Out By Life
27th Dec 2013 9:57am
Darkness is comfy, but damn, it's a hammock-on-a-cruise-ship feeling when you can't remember that bad shit as much anymore.
Mindfulness is cool.
Mindfulness is cool.
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