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'Burst'
Sometimes I get
manic
in a panic
mayhap,
it's the semantics
that create
these analytical antics
with these verses
that have me frantic
because
the voices
that feed
this indeed
breeds
choices in
pinpoint direction
as reflection's focusin'
that mental imagery
in me
to pen
provokin' thoughts
that potentially
gains in size
until it expands
n' becomes GIGANTIC...
manic
in a panic
mayhap,
it's the semantics
that create
these analytical antics
with these verses
that have me frantic
because
the voices
that feed
this indeed
breeds
choices in
pinpoint direction
as reflection's focusin'
that mental imagery
in me
to pen
provokin' thoughts
that potentially
gains in size
until it expands
n' becomes GIGANTIC...
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3rd Sep 2013 00:55am
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3rd Sep 2013 2:18am
Wow...I'm super surprised n very happy to hear from you
my sweetness as its bern awhile since I lady saw your name on my page! Thank u so much TL! :)
my sweetness as its bern awhile since I lady saw your name on my page! Thank u so much TL! :)
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3rd Sep 2013 2:27am
Lmao omg u just bout made me pass out with that remark lol
Okie I won't explode...yet lol thanks for the laugh, n support always lil sexy u :)
Okie I won't explode...yet lol thanks for the laugh, n support always lil sexy u :)
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re: Re: 'Burst'
3rd Sep 2013 2:31am
Yup yup ur right, that's how it goes no doubt! I thank u for ur insight n your support always my sweet friend :)
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re: Re: 'Burst'
3rd Sep 2013 10:12pm
Thank you my sweetness! Yea I'm sure this is relateable to many I just thought I'd express it poetically lol
Appreciate u my friend :)
Appreciate u my friend :)
Re: 'Burst'
4th Sep 2013 00:21am
first thought this brings to mind is that thoughts become supernovas.. that burst and spill words!!! this Brilliantly conveys the urge,the need to express whats within...I loved this!!!
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re: Re: 'Burst'
4th Sep 2013 1:34am
Aaaawwwww n I LOVE this comment! U super sweet beauty you! Thank u so much for always treating me so good n giving ur support :)
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4th Sep 2013 5:50am
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4th Sep 2013 11:03am
hey there! good to hear from you again D! lol
Thank you for the comment n support, it's appreciated :)
Thank you for the comment n support, it's appreciated :)
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4th Sep 2013 11:04am
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4th Sep 2013 8:12pm
That's a pretty co way to define it bro! thanks a ton for the
interesting definition n the support always! :)
interesting definition n the support always! :)
Re: 'Burst'
4th Sep 2013 5:08pm
If I read this right, the topic is a fascinating one; about the process of writing. I am thinking such poems should be called metapoems. Loved reading this.
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4th Sep 2013 8:14pm
You read it right bro. Lol n yea meta poems sounds like a great idea... Maybe you should ink a piece, n redefine the style? I bet it'll have legs! Thanks a bunch for the thoughts n support :)
Re: 'Burst'
6th Sep 2013 7:30pm
I tell you brother, the flow and energy from this piece is highly appreciated and respected. Enjoyed the read, as your writing skills are flawless.
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7th Sep 2013 5:00am
Why thank you sir! So very kind of you to express admiration
for this piece, I'm humbled n grateful truly bro! :)
for this piece, I'm humbled n grateful truly bro! :)
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9th Sep 2013 12:47pm