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Love is Missing
Your smiles light up your eyes
Your eyes twinkle
You laugh so easily
When I say something silly
But there is something missing
Your hands touch my cheeks
In the morning
When you say goodbye
You toot your horn as always
When you drive away
But there is something missing
I know you don’t love me anymore
You no longer kiss me in the night
You no longer hold me tight
And love me like you did before
In-Love is missing
The bonfire is gone
I hope the flickering flame
survives.
Your eyes twinkle
You laugh so easily
When I say something silly
But there is something missing
Your hands touch my cheeks
In the morning
When you say goodbye
You toot your horn as always
When you drive away
But there is something missing
I know you don’t love me anymore
You no longer kiss me in the night
You no longer hold me tight
And love me like you did before
In-Love is missing
The bonfire is gone
I hope the flickering flame
survives.
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31st Aug 2013 1:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Jun 2019 9:40pm
31st Aug 2013 1:27pm
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31st Aug 2013 1:32pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
31st Aug 2013 2:03pm
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31st Aug 2013 2:35pm
Re: Love is Missing
31st Aug 2013 2:07pm
A despairing Write Dear Grace-sad when energy is lost and no longer cared for!!!
Perfect capture!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
Perfect capture!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!
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31st Aug 2013 2:36pm
Re: Love is Missing
31st Aug 2013 3:58pm
Oh wow Grace
I felt this like a pounch in the gut.
That last line ...deep
Good luck
G
I felt this like a pounch in the gut.
That last line ...deep
Good luck
G
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31st Aug 2013 4:23pm
Re: Love is Missing
31st Aug 2013 5:48pm
Sometimes even under the ashes hot ember exists my dear Grace. Nicely done!
Red
Red
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31st Aug 2013 6:11pm
Yes sometimes it smoulders underneath, at times its just cold coals. Thanks Red!:)
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31st Aug 2013 6:06pm
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31st Aug 2013 6:12pm