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fantasy merchant
{she’s a prostitute & a poet, & she tells me these things,
& I believe her…}
come to me with a stiff libido & a fat wallet. tell me your
darkest fantasy. when you leave, your nine-iron will be limp
& your wallet will be slimmer than a cat-walk princess, &
you’ll know what it means to lay down with a goddess.
lie down on my velveteen bed & I will eff you up the sea cay.
you can gaze in shock & awe , as you watch my annie sprinkle
down my dancer’s legs, like rain on a summer’s eve. you will lap
up the flowing champagne of me, ‘cause it’s sweet, like swallowing
a rainbow, but don’t you dare miss one inch of my skin.
get on me & own me like a man who remembers that Eve was
created for Adam, she was born from a place near his heart &
he takes it back, like a savage with fire in his eyes. ride me
like Johnny Thunder, shift it all the way up till you blow your
transmission, till we crash thru the gates of heaven!
I’ve been up that street of discontent & back again. I’ve lived
hard times, harder than the crowbars that invade me, & I
could cry, I could cry me a river, but that won’t keep me in
lipstick or muzzle the wolves at my door.
I’m one step ahead of the law & the men are not gentle,
but a girl’s got to make a living.
you can beat me & bruise me, you can break my heart for real,
just say you’re sorry, baby – I’m very forgiving…
Published 29th Aug 2013
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29th Aug 2013 3:20am
I don't often read the erotic poems on this site, because I feel allot of them are a misrepresentation of a spiritual connection, but his piece is amazing, it has a real feeling of survival by any means for the working girls of that era. I think she likes it to.
Real poetry here, love it. Sorry I just cant think of the words I need to write to give this piece the credit it deserves.
Real poetry here, love it. Sorry I just cant think of the words I need to write to give this piece the credit it deserves.
29th Aug 2013 5:02am
Favorite line in this piece, "get on me & own me like a man who remembers that Eve was
created for Adam." Sure brilliance my friend. Two thumbs up!
created for Adam." Sure brilliance my friend. Two thumbs up!
29th Aug 2013 6:22am
A fantasy worth rereading! A true wordsmith, with a remarkable ability for storytelling!
29th Aug 2013 6:24am
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29th Aug 2013 9:09am
I just discussing your ink on prostitutes; you bring so many layers to their plight
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31st Aug 2013 1:55pm
Hey Fedds,
I read this in the Alter-Ego comp and thought your lines were bloody awesome...
"lie down on my velveteen bed & I will eff you up the sea cay"
Well, we had a good crack at it, too bad he... I mean, Holly isn't into transgender first person poetry. Maybe we were both a little too close for her comfort.
Cool poem!
case
I read this in the Alter-Ego comp and thought your lines were bloody awesome...
"lie down on my velveteen bed & I will eff you up the sea cay"
Well, we had a good crack at it, too bad he... I mean, Holly isn't into transgender first person poetry. Maybe we were both a little too close for her comfort.
Cool poem!
case
