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Bitter Cup
The bitter nectar
from your cruel years
Fell from my face
My cup runneth over
I drank from that cup
Of harshness and pain
Without a chaser
Letting it fill the creases
Of a soul dry-heaving with shame
I drank until I got high on life lessons
Until my world became sane
to acknowledged the blessing
I drank until I overdose
Until true strength
I could boast
I drank of those bitters
took them all down
I drank until I had no more
until my cup was dry
from your cruel years
Fell from my face
My cup runneth over
I drank from that cup
Of harshness and pain
Without a chaser
Letting it fill the creases
Of a soul dry-heaving with shame
I drank until I got high on life lessons
Until my world became sane
to acknowledged the blessing
I drank until I overdose
Until true strength
I could boast
I drank of those bitters
took them all down
I drank until I had no more
until my cup was dry
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Re: Bitter Cup
20th Aug 2013 10:17pm
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21st Aug 2013 1:03am
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jun 2018 9:39pm
20th Aug 2013 10:55pm
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21st Aug 2013 1:04am
Re: Bitter Cup
20th Aug 2013 10:57pm
From strife we derive strength but the acquisition is the hard part. Nicely done G!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Bitter Cup
21st Aug 2013 1:08am
Hey Red
Thank you
It's always the journey that feeds our growth.
much love my friend
Thank you
It's always the journey that feeds our growth.
much love my friend
Re: Bitter Cup
21st Aug 2013 00:00am
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21st Aug 2013 1:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
21st Aug 2013 1:00am
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21st Aug 2013 1:11am
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21st Aug 2013 1:42am
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21st Aug 2013 3:30am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 7:35pm
21st Aug 2013 5:32pm
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22nd Aug 2013 6:21pm
Thank you Kitty!
Releasing the tears help the bitterness to disappear, but bleeding them out in verse helps best.
much love
Releasing the tears help the bitterness to disappear, but bleeding them out in verse helps best.
much love
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
22nd Aug 2013 10:26am
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re: Re: Bitter Cup
22nd Aug 2013 6:24pm
We all drink from this cup at some point don't we.
Thank you Magdalena for showing me love
G
Thank you Magdalena for showing me love
G
Re: Bitter Cup
24th Aug 2013 3:53am
It seems that cup gets passed around...a relatable read that fills you with each sip; word by word, line by line. I love your use of metaphors...very nice poem!
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re: Re: Bitter Cup
27th Aug 2013 5:15am
I'm glad to see you again ryteoutlet.
Thank you for such a lovely comment.
much love
G