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'Tainted Magic'
~inspired by a comment by Winter
to a reviewer on a piece she wrote, thanks for
the inspiration Mia! :) ~
Tainted Magic,
such insanity
Like the inhumanity
of a benign hat trick
Like how two
become one yet, don't stick
Like the birth
of something born new
Beautifully hued,
smeared with an ugly view
Like a kiss
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death
Tainted Magic,
mystical too
Like how pretty
a painting of us two
garishly mangled
by situational circumstances
dangling askew...
to a reviewer on a piece she wrote, thanks for
the inspiration Mia! :) ~
Tainted Magic,
such insanity
Like the inhumanity
of a benign hat trick
Like how two
become one yet, don't stick
Like the birth
of something born new
Beautifully hued,
smeared with an ugly view
Like a kiss
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death
Tainted Magic,
mystical too
Like how pretty
a painting of us two
garishly mangled
by situational circumstances
dangling askew...
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Re: 'Tainted Magic'
16th Aug 2013 2:44pm
"Beautifully hued,
smeared with an ugly view"
that sounds like the prettiest shade of jade!
"Like a kiss
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death"
love this line also..Beautifully captured..enjoyed :)
smeared with an ugly view"
that sounds like the prettiest shade of jade!
"Like a kiss
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death"
love this line also..Beautifully captured..enjoyed :)
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re: Re: 'Tainted Magic'
16th Aug 2013 4:13pm
Aaaawwww I wanna hug you!! lol thank u my sweetheart, grateful to u for ur support always!
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16th Aug 2013 4:15pm
Lol why yes u are!! lol thank you
I'm happy I did your comment justice
n I appreciate you so much as always :)
I'm happy I did your comment justice
n I appreciate you so much as always :)
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16th Aug 2013 5:49pm
Thankies my sweetest lady! I'm happy u liked n truly grateful to u always for ur support :)
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re: Re: 'Tainted Magic'
16th Aug 2013 8:14pm
Thanks bro! I'm always humbled by your words n honored by ur support... Deuces kid, mad love 4 u n urs :)
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16th Aug 2013 8:06pm
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16th Aug 2013 8:15pm
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 9:51pm
Damn, this was gorgeous!
LOVED! Xo
LOVED! Xo
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re: Re: 'Tainted Magic'
16th Aug 2013 11:02pm
Aaawww thank you! to be showered with ur
sweet rain is truly outstanding n amazing! Appreciate u my dear :)
sweet rain is truly outstanding n amazing! Appreciate u my dear :)
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16th Aug 2013 11:26pm
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17th Aug 2013 5:54am
Like a kiss
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death : Simply beautiful :)
of love sparks breath
as the taste brings death : Simply beautiful :)
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18th Aug 2013 3:50am
Thank you my sweetheart, I'm truly humbled by your support n appreciate you always :)
Re: 'Tainted Magic'
18th Aug 2013 7:34pm
Like the inhumanity
of a benign hat trick
Like how two
become one don't stick
great write Poet
enjoyed the read
of a benign hat trick
Like how two
become one don't stick
great write Poet
enjoyed the read
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19th Aug 2013 1:03am
Thank you my sweet friend, truly happy you liked n appreciate ur support greatly :)
Re: 'Tainted Magic'
30th Aug 2013 3:32pm
Poetical and captivating write, Poe! Love the content and the magic words you used to express yourself. Enjoyed!
Chi
Chi
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re: Re: 'Tainted Magic'
30th Aug 2013 5:47pm
Aaaawwww thank u!! ~note to self, remember to kiss
Chi for every word uttered~ lol appreciate u lady :)
Chi for every word uttered~ lol appreciate u lady :)
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