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Every action has a reaction
It's one side of my life.
Do you know me and why I write?
Have you walked my path?
Felt the pain of my past?
My need to feel desired and admired
A way that I was taught
By maybe similar people like the ones who read my naughty thoughts.
Conditioned to be stereotyped
To make manhoods rise
This time round not using my body but my mind lies.
But here's the twist.
I act for you to react
Aiming to stimulate
And you have played your part well
Commenting on the genre you hate.
Yes erotic poems get more comments and reads
But there are 10,000 more Love poems putting that genre in the lead.
So look at the bigger picture take heed
It's our natural animal instincts to have that sexual need
For anyone to read at their leisure
But some twist it and distort into their own sick mind for pleasure.
We all have our demons, our pain on D.U.P
Showing our vulnerability
Not lack of writing ability.
Sometimes under pseudonyms
At least one more or a few
For all eyes to view.
How many times have you?
Just leave them be and let them have their poetic freedom
No one's forcing you to read them.
While its good to share your opinions in a constructive way.
Hassling them in PMs is something that should stay away.
Trying to change their mindset?
Is that your mind trick?
Cowardly sending a nuisance message with a click.
No one should be belittling or doubting someone's worth
Wait!
Does that make you better than the ones reading my thoughts like the ones who conditioned me since birth?
A vicious circle
Now's the time to let mindsets grow
For me I'm making the observation
Trying to give that mind stimulation
But who knows who's really talking to you whilst in conversation.
Just an insight
Do you know me and why I write?
Have you walked my path?
Felt the pain of my past?
My need to feel desired and admired
A way that I was taught
By maybe similar people like the ones who read my naughty thoughts.
Conditioned to be stereotyped
To make manhoods rise
This time round not using my body but my mind lies.
But here's the twist.
I act for you to react
Aiming to stimulate
And you have played your part well
Commenting on the genre you hate.
Yes erotic poems get more comments and reads
But there are 10,000 more Love poems putting that genre in the lead.
So look at the bigger picture take heed
It's our natural animal instincts to have that sexual need
For anyone to read at their leisure
But some twist it and distort into their own sick mind for pleasure.
We all have our demons, our pain on D.U.P
Showing our vulnerability
Not lack of writing ability.
Sometimes under pseudonyms
At least one more or a few
For all eyes to view.
How many times have you?
Just leave them be and let them have their poetic freedom
No one's forcing you to read them.
While its good to share your opinions in a constructive way.
Hassling them in PMs is something that should stay away.
Trying to change their mindset?
Is that your mind trick?
Cowardly sending a nuisance message with a click.
No one should be belittling or doubting someone's worth
Wait!
Does that make you better than the ones reading my thoughts like the ones who conditioned me since birth?
A vicious circle
Now's the time to let mindsets grow
For me I'm making the observation
Trying to give that mind stimulation
But who knows who's really talking to you whilst in conversation.
Just an insight
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