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A Poolside Fantasy...
I just gettin' back in from morning jog
jumped on the computer, checkin' the daily blog
quickly saw an email with an attachment to it
so I clicked on it and saw a shockin' photo
BOOM!! went my mind... (it was the picture that blew it)
It was a vision of such a lovely pair,
two shapely, scantily -clad women...standing there,
like they stepped right out of a dream
in teeny weeny bikinis, looking so hot
think I'll grab a bucket of 'cool-off-ice' that I got
Yet, the thing that really put it over the top?
Was the message with it that made my eyes pop
Conjuring ups images so crisp, and clear
"We had each other...in the pool, on the chair,
in the water, all over really, we did it everywhere...
anyone could've saw us, but we didn't care..."
My eyes were streaming tears of joy
Omfg! These two beauties were together?
What the hell were they trying to do?..hurt this boy?
Suddenly, I felt a fevered pitch,
had a hungred itch,
it was building fast
just couldn't erase the imagery,
those girls seemed to be
having a god awful blast
After many long hours of thought
wrought contemplations...
Decided I would offer an 'open' invitation
"your pics were the bomb!
and the words left me so very very heated
So i was hopin' would you kindly come visit,
so I can sit 'stiffly' n' watch you two eat it...?"
jumped on the computer, checkin' the daily blog
quickly saw an email with an attachment to it
so I clicked on it and saw a shockin' photo
BOOM!! went my mind... (it was the picture that blew it)
It was a vision of such a lovely pair,
two shapely, scantily -clad women...standing there,
like they stepped right out of a dream
in teeny weeny bikinis, looking so hot
think I'll grab a bucket of 'cool-off-ice' that I got
Yet, the thing that really put it over the top?
Was the message with it that made my eyes pop
Conjuring ups images so crisp, and clear
"We had each other...in the pool, on the chair,
in the water, all over really, we did it everywhere...
anyone could've saw us, but we didn't care..."
My eyes were streaming tears of joy
Omfg! These two beauties were together?
What the hell were they trying to do?..hurt this boy?
Suddenly, I felt a fevered pitch,
had a hungred itch,
it was building fast
just couldn't erase the imagery,
those girls seemed to be
having a god awful blast
After many long hours of thought
wrought contemplations...
Decided I would offer an 'open' invitation
"your pics were the bomb!
and the words left me so very very heated
So i was hopin' would you kindly come visit,
so I can sit 'stiffly' n' watch you two eat it...?"
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- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
13th Aug 2013 1:02pm
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re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
13th Aug 2013 2:23pm
Lmao, nah sadly this is where the dream ended lol
glad u enjoyed what there was though my dear lol appreciate u! :)
glad u enjoyed what there was though my dear lol appreciate u! :)
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13th Aug 2013 2:10pm
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re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
13th Aug 2013 2:25pm
Thank you my sweet Kitty, as always I'm pleased you liked n truly grateful for your support :)
Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
13th Aug 2013 3:23pm
You made my day, dear :-). What a nice dream! Can imagine you'd like it to go on and on :-). Enjoyed it!
Chi
Chi
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13th Aug 2013 3:36pm
Yup! Ur right lady lol happy you enjoyed
n as always I appreciate ur support :)
n as always I appreciate ur support :)
Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
13th Aug 2013 3:58pm
re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
13th Aug 2013 4:04pm
Dreaming! Lol thanks though for being 'so kind' to me!
lol i appreciate ur support always :)
lol i appreciate ur support always :)
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 5:05pm
Damn, you just wanna watch them eat it huh? lol...
Well, that is a man's next fantasy, if he can't join them...lol...
Entertaining ink my dude...Xo
Well, that is a man's next fantasy, if he can't join them...lol...
Entertaining ink my dude...Xo
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13th Aug 2013 5:41pm
Lmao, NAH...I'm good at looking only so long then uhm
I'd have to 'assist' of course! lol thank you
for that laugh n always supporting me u sweet lady :)
I'd have to 'assist' of course! lol thank you
for that laugh n always supporting me u sweet lady :)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:39am
14th Aug 2013 1:49am
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14th Aug 2013 5:16am
Lol I'm glad u smiled n hey a man thing
Maybe but plenty of women like it too lol
Mmuuaahh! Thank u so much! :)
Maybe but plenty of women like it too lol
Mmuuaahh! Thank u so much! :)
Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
14th Aug 2013 4:36am
Conjuring ups images so crisp, and clear
"We had each other...in the pool, on the chair,
in the water, all over really, we did it everywhere...
anyone could've saw us, but we didn't care..."
my oh my
enjoyed!!!
"We had each other...in the pool, on the chair,
in the water, all over really, we did it everywhere...
anyone could've saw us, but we didn't care..."
my oh my
enjoyed!!!
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14th Aug 2013 5:22am
Lol I'm happy you did n I thank you so much for telling me so lol...appreciate u lady :)
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14th Aug 2013 11:45am
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re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
Yea I agree with you there! thank you my friend, appreciate your support always :)
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15th Aug 2013 1:05am
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30th Aug 2013 11:15am
Sorry bout the delay in reply bro. Sometimes I'm slow to notice
I had comments... But I'm glad u liked n truly appreciate all your support :)
I had comments... But I'm glad u liked n truly appreciate all your support :)
re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
30th Aug 2013 11:17am
Hi sweetie, so sorry it took me this long to comment :( didnt even realize I had anymore on this til now! lol thank u n muah!!
Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
30th Aug 2013 6:22am
I love writing erotica but your formation of writing is much like mine, I enjoyed this had a lot of flow to it!
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re: Re: A Poolside Fantasy...
30th Aug 2013 11:19am
Heeey! Really!? Guess I need to write more! lol
Anyhow, happy you enjoyed n yes I noticed u have a similar
rhythm to your flow as well :) thank u n I appreciate ur support! :)
Anyhow, happy you enjoyed n yes I noticed u have a similar
rhythm to your flow as well :) thank u n I appreciate ur support! :)