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You Wouldn't Understand
Hold my head
under the bleakness
see if I drown,
your oxygen
is my poison
an eternity spent breathing,
disgusted by the beauty that hides underneath
the surface of all the hate
it was triggered,
this madness was earned
it's my reward,
the pain stopped hurting
I'm left wondering
if it ever existed at all?
under the bleakness
see if I drown,
your oxygen
is my poison
an eternity spent breathing,
disgusted by the beauty that hides underneath
the surface of all the hate
it was triggered,
this madness was earned
it's my reward,
the pain stopped hurting
I'm left wondering
if it ever existed at all?
Published 12th Aug 2013
| Edited 14th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 7:22pm
Whew, nikki! This was a dark, potent and intriguing piece! I love the soundness of your mind and the creativity you possess, when scribing your point. And the wickedness of your image selection, is so cool! Awesome! Xo
12th Aug 2013 9:50pm
Did it ever exist at all? Good question Nikki wish I had an answer for you.
Disturbing write from a dark imagination; you scare me at times (In a good way)
Disturbing write from a dark imagination; you scare me at times (In a good way)
13th Aug 2013 3:06am
13th Aug 2013 8:04pm
16th Aug 2013 7:27am
your oxygen
is my poison
I've dated her. Worked for them. Been surrounded by the sort. Thank you for writing this Nikki!
is my poison
I've dated her. Worked for them. Been surrounded by the sort. Thank you for writing this Nikki!
26th Aug 2013 12:21pm
WICKEDLY SATIATING AND AT THE SAME TIME THIRST WRENCHING, DEVASTATINGLY BEAUTIFUL,I SELDOM PASS THIS WAY NIKKI, BUT YOU KNOW I'M ADDICTED, OOO SO HIGH, I'M OFF AGAIN!
(SABBATH)
(SABBATH)
8th Mar 2014 3:49pm