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No place for someone like me...
Hollow eyed, with a haunted stare
I am walking the edge…
Along the precipice of madness
asking myself over and over again…
what has happened to us all?
When did we stop fighting
for things worth that and more?!
What happened to selfless
acts of kindness or unsung heroism,
the pure light of love or
the fiery righteousness of honesty?
Why… WHY!!!... whispering, why…
I… for a long time now, have been battling
the suffocating sadness that threatens
to drown me without mercy,
and the clawing, gnashing bite of madness
tearing at my frail mental edges.
There is no place in this world for people like me…
I am out sync in this place and time,
I believe in kindness, in generosity
just for the sake of it,
In honesty because it’s right,
selflessly giving of myself
to any and all who may need it.
but… There is no place in this world for people like me!
I thought if I worked hard and was a good mother
and a loyal loving wife, a faithful mate,
honest and god fearing life would be good…
hahaha how cynical …
I could not be further from the truth,
the more I gave the more was taken
and ever more was demanded,
the more I loved the more I was used, abused
and then discarded like refuse.
The more I sacrificed for my children
the more they scorned my mother’s love
now in the end I am alone…
swallowing tears of anguish and agony,
of a pain deep and unyielding…
why… why am I here?...
I want to sleep now and never wake
to leave the sadness of this place,
to know this heartache no more…
There is no place, no home… no peace
in this world for people like me…
Let my light be extinguished,
and my fire go out,
let the embers grow cold,
fading into no ones memory
for in this world, there is
no place for me to find refuge
and finally call home…
Gypsy Red
I am walking the edge…
Along the precipice of madness
asking myself over and over again…
what has happened to us all?
When did we stop fighting
for things worth that and more?!
What happened to selfless
acts of kindness or unsung heroism,
the pure light of love or
the fiery righteousness of honesty?
Why… WHY!!!... whispering, why…
I… for a long time now, have been battling
the suffocating sadness that threatens
to drown me without mercy,
and the clawing, gnashing bite of madness
tearing at my frail mental edges.
There is no place in this world for people like me…
I am out sync in this place and time,
I believe in kindness, in generosity
just for the sake of it,
In honesty because it’s right,
selflessly giving of myself
to any and all who may need it.
but… There is no place in this world for people like me!
I thought if I worked hard and was a good mother
and a loyal loving wife, a faithful mate,
honest and god fearing life would be good…
hahaha how cynical …
I could not be further from the truth,
the more I gave the more was taken
and ever more was demanded,
the more I loved the more I was used, abused
and then discarded like refuse.
The more I sacrificed for my children
the more they scorned my mother’s love
now in the end I am alone…
swallowing tears of anguish and agony,
of a pain deep and unyielding…
why… why am I here?...
I want to sleep now and never wake
to leave the sadness of this place,
to know this heartache no more…
There is no place, no home… no peace
in this world for people like me…
Let my light be extinguished,
and my fire go out,
let the embers grow cold,
fading into no ones memory
for in this world, there is
no place for me to find refuge
and finally call home…
Gypsy Red
Written by
marielavoue
(Gypsy Red)
Published 11th Aug 2013
| Edited 12th Aug 2013
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Re: No place for someone like me...
11th Aug 2013 9:40pm
And yet, the hard ironic truth is that without people like you, there would be no world that could seemingly do without you: unsung, unappreciated, disrespected by the very ones you have provided with the freedom to ignore you, but never unloved, and you know that. There is a place for someone just like you, right here.
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11th Aug 2013 9:48pm
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12th Aug 2013 4:46pm
I wanted to say to you Chris thank you for being a true friend. Luv ya bunches!
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11th Aug 2013 10:20pm
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12th Aug 2013 4:48pm
Magda, you and I share a sisterhood that moves beyond poetry you are more than a friend to me you are a sister (from another misses and mister)
THANK YOU!
Red
THANK YOU!
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 10:14pm
Well, I guess people like you and I and many others, need to start a support group because we definitely exist. We're just placed amongst those who lack our loving energy. Placed in their presence purposely, I believe! :)
I just adore this ink, Red! Heartfelt and wonderfully written Xo
Pen On Beautiful One~
I just adore this ink, Red! Heartfelt and wonderfully written Xo
Pen On Beautiful One~
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11th Aug 2013 10:21pm
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:51pm
You know rain I do believe that, but I am fallible and human and sometimes the sorrows in heart outweigh my the wisdom of my soul. Its beautiful people like you that help bring me back to the light thank you so much.
Red
Red
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11th Aug 2013 11:29pm
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
I think it would be good Kitty because good people just sometimes need to know they are not alone even though it may feel that way sometimes.Thank you so much.
Red
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
11th Aug 2013 11:15pm
By far my favorite poem!Painfully true,yet beautiful in it's own way!
I agree with turtle and Rain...
Thank you for writing this Gypsy Red ;)
I agree with turtle and Rain...
Thank you for writing this Gypsy Red ;)
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re: Re: No place for someone like me...
11th Aug 2013 11:31pm
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:55pm
Sweets my heart was heavy yesterday and I did not answer as I should have, it is my honor and true pleasure to give voice to the underdog to, the unsung because this world can be a hurtful place.Thank you so much for reading this piece.
Red
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
11th Aug 2013 11:49pm
Wow this piece was deep and rife with
conviction.
It gave me chills.
Someone like you as you say would seem
out of place because the present course
of the world seems to be the polar-opposite.
But as it was once said; it all comes back
around again.
I know that it seems contradictory to a lot
of my scribes but there is a Scripture that
always strengthened me...
"Be patient therefore, brethren, unto the coming of the Lord. Behold, the husbandman waiteth for the precious fruit of the earth, and hath long patience for it, until he receive the early and latter rain.
I think the patient part is what got me.
Impacting write Gypsy... Thomas
conviction.
It gave me chills.
Someone like you as you say would seem
out of place because the present course
of the world seems to be the polar-opposite.
But as it was once said; it all comes back
around again.
I know that it seems contradictory to a lot
of my scribes but there is a Scripture that
always strengthened me...
"Be patient therefore, brethren, unto the coming of the Lord. Behold, the husbandman waiteth for the precious fruit of the earth, and hath long patience for it, until he receive the early and latter rain.
I think the patient part is what got me.
Impacting write Gypsy... Thomas
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11th Aug 2013 11:57pm
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:58pm
Pan, I have learned in my lifetime that there are many layers to people that once you think you know someone you may be surprised to know there are more layers to them. You are one of those people and I for one am glad that you are. Thank you so much for the encouraging words.
Red
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 00:24am
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12th Aug 2013 00:32am
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:59pm
Thank you lovely Grace I know you have felt out of sync as well your kindness always shines bright.
Red
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 00:33am
Deep woe Dear Red-emotion staining ink-indeed such talent--You are a Light as well--keep shining!!!
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12th Aug 2013 1:14am
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12th Aug 2013 5:01pm
Soul... you already know... much peace, love and light to you my sweet and gentle Soul.
Red
Red
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12th Aug 2013 1:15am
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12th Aug 2013 5:04pm
Yes we are Strider we have seen too much felt too much know too much and most of all hurt too much.
John 14:27
27 My peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
My brother, my friend Thank you
Red
John 14:27
27 My peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
My brother, my friend Thank you
Red
Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:25pm
You are the Queen of visual poems... your creativity steady and excellent.
You are one of the phenomenal, straight up writers that keep me returning to this site!
You are one of the phenomenal, straight up writers that keep me returning to this site!
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re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 4:45pm
Thank You Ken and its people/friends like you, that I try to bring my best for, I may not always succeed but I give it my all.Luv ya bunches.
Red
Red
re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 5:05pm
Oh BTW muaahsss all over that wild woolly mane covered face of yours, you are the coolest!
Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 7:07pm
You always have a place sweetheart!! As you told me once, “strap those boots up and lets go”…. Always keep your head up and know that we care.
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12th Aug 2013 7:26pm
Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 10:22pm
I'll tell you this... If this place isn't for you, then it ain't
me, and about another million or so just like us! I. Other words the world needs Poets n you my friend are truly that, a POET! powerful yet sad ink
me, and about another million or so just like us! I. Other words the world needs Poets n you my friend are truly that, a POET! powerful yet sad ink
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re: Re: No place for someone like me...
12th Aug 2013 10:27pm
Thanks Poe I was in a world of hurt when I wrote it, all these beautiful souls helped me come back from that abyss of sadness. Thank you babes.
Red
Red