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Grave Mind
As a child I learned to be brave,
all the while I've yearned for the grave,
worn a smile as I've burned in my cave
Published 11th Aug 2013
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- Edited 15th May 2018 3:45pm
11th Aug 2013 9:01pm
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11th Aug 2013 10:04pm
Haha Thanks, I used to write super long ones so tried to just do the opposite a few times. I've written a couple of non rhyming ones, experimenting a bit. It was so hard for me to do because I find rhyming much more fun but I do want to challenge myself to doing it again in the future, thanks for stopping by.
Anonymous
11th Aug 2013 10:16pm
Simplicity can be powerful, eh?! Nice! Xo
11th Aug 2013 10:34pm
13th Aug 2013 00:24am
Kinda time's running, we are changing philosophy:)
Tight lines, like it much, Ghos!
Tight lines, like it much, Ghos!
13th Aug 2013 3:04am
17th Aug 2013 00:19am
I enjoyed this. I do agree with Queen of Angels in that it could go a bit further. I'd definitely come back to read it.
17th Aug 2013 1:06am
thanks, means a lot. Yeah, I hear ya. The thought was just to try say a lot with as little words as possible. I'm sure I will touch on the subject In the future though.