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Honest Criticism
madness and chaos was the guaranteed curse for all the creatures
across the spectrum
spinning in rough momentum
the pieces of ugly confused creation caught up in the galaxy's
collection
the things that destroy everything they touch
everything that is created consumes way to much
no one can get along
and down everyone is left to fall
alone are we left on this rock in the middle of nothingness
after all
across the spectrum
spinning in rough momentum
the pieces of ugly confused creation caught up in the galaxy's
collection
the things that destroy everything they touch
everything that is created consumes way to much
no one can get along
and down everyone is left to fall
alone are we left on this rock in the middle of nothingness
after all
Published 11th Aug 2013
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