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Going Hungry*
He makes me want to tear
his clothes off him
off me
throw him down and give
him a tongue lashing
climb on top
ease onto his piece pipe
and melt like butter
My energy holds him in
that barrier of what's
real, captivating
him with my
fragrance
like sanity's quite need to
linger over his
sensitive tip
I close over him and
envelope his
vulnerable parts
I've been starved
too long
his clothes off him
off me
throw him down and give
him a tongue lashing
climb on top
ease onto his piece pipe
and melt like butter
My energy holds him in
that barrier of what's
real, captivating
him with my
fragrance
like sanity's quite need to
linger over his
sensitive tip
I close over him and
envelope his
vulnerable parts
I've been starved
too long
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Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 2:42pm
re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:16pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
10th Aug 2013 3:45pm
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re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:17pm
Thank you Gabriel, I agree..there's some nice work coming out of everyone lately! :)
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10th Aug 2013 4:35pm
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re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:18pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 3:35pm
10th Aug 2013 5:03pm
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re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:20pm
A rumble, steam, a puff of smoke...don't matter, at least you felt something ;-) Thank you Lerd :)
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- Edited 15th May 2018 3:35pm
10th Aug 2013 7:30pm
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Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 6:02pm
No matter how many of these sensual
scribes you write TL, each one is
unique and exciting.
I agree with Lerd; I felt some excitement
and stirring within.
The picture was strange but at the same
time somehow erotic.
Enjoyed... Pan
scribes you write TL, each one is
unique and exciting.
I agree with Lerd; I felt some excitement
and stirring within.
The picture was strange but at the same
time somehow erotic.
Enjoyed... Pan
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re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:22pm
Thank you kindly Pan.
I got the same feeling from the picture,
needing to use it because if it's different
look!Thank you for reading and commenting Pan ;)
I got the same feeling from the picture,
needing to use it because if it's different
look!Thank you for reading and commenting Pan ;)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
10th Aug 2013 6:02pm
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re: Re: Going Hungry*
10th Aug 2013 7:23pm
It's been pretty intense around here lately strider!
Thanks for commenting ;)
Thanks for commenting ;)
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10th Aug 2013 8:14pm
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10th Aug 2013 8:48pm
Re: Going Hungry*
11th Aug 2013 00:05am
re: Re: Going Hungry*
11th Aug 2013 00:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Sep 2019 11:37pm
12th Aug 2013 10:33am
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